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We do miss your presence over there. You're one of the constant fixtures in the music space. Hopefully with the new music from Meghan Trainor we shall see you back soon :)
Pseud 14 (
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13:15, 12 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Well written
Lead and infobox
A doo-wop song with contemporary influences, the song incorporates -- perhaps some tweaking as you mention "song" a second time after introducing it as a "doo-wop song"
reached numbers 15 and 24 on the Adult Top 40 and Mainstream Top 40 charts -- worth mentioning that these charts are in the US
In it, Trainor, alongside background dancers, performs -- Instead of "in it", maybe somewhere along the lines of It features Trainor alongside background dancers, performing a dance routine...
Background
which went viral on TikTok -- I would link viral to the appropriate term
"I worked with Meghan's husband and manager for months trying to surprise her for her birthday." -- is there a reason why months here is italicized in the quote?
The quote in the source has all caps for "months", since that would be considered shouting under Wikipedia convention I have substituted it with italics for emphasis.--NØ12:25, 12 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the quality review,
Pseud 14. I could really feel the prose getting improved while making the suggested edits. I hope you are having a great day!--NØ12:25, 12 June 2024 (UTC)reply
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We do miss your presence over there. You're one of the constant fixtures in the music space. Hopefully with the new music from Meghan Trainor we shall see you back soon :)
Pseud 14 (
talk)
13:15, 12 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Well written
Lead and infobox
A doo-wop song with contemporary influences, the song incorporates -- perhaps some tweaking as you mention "song" a second time after introducing it as a "doo-wop song"
reached numbers 15 and 24 on the Adult Top 40 and Mainstream Top 40 charts -- worth mentioning that these charts are in the US
In it, Trainor, alongside background dancers, performs -- Instead of "in it", maybe somewhere along the lines of It features Trainor alongside background dancers, performing a dance routine...
Background
which went viral on TikTok -- I would link viral to the appropriate term
"I worked with Meghan's husband and manager for months trying to surprise her for her birthday." -- is there a reason why months here is italicized in the quote?
The quote in the source has all caps for "months", since that would be considered shouting under Wikipedia convention I have substituted it with italics for emphasis.--NØ12:25, 12 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the quality review,
Pseud 14. I could really feel the prose getting improved while making the suggested edits. I hope you are having a great day!--NØ12:25, 12 June 2024 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.