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This page has been making the rounds on Reddit and now YouTube for it's somewhat laughable intro sentence so expect some increased anon vandalism... EoRdE6( Come Talk to Me!) 00:16, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
I feel tired article is rather unneeded and suggest it glitter removal. Everything here can already be found on the beekeeping article. (I'm currently on mobile rn so I have no clue how to create hyperlinks here Rae Dreemurr ( talk) 19:10, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
The first sentence clearly violates WP:REDUNDANCY, but I'm not sure how to rephrase it QoopyQoopy ( talk) 22:02, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
- Yep you're absolutely right
QoopyQoopy – it was an egregious example of the much-loathed formula
X Y Z is a Z of type Y in location X
or whateverthehell. I have ripped out most of the first sentence so now it is inelegant but works a little better. Whether the encyclopaedia desperately needs this article to exist at all is another question for another time ... for now, though, thanks and best wishes DBaK ( talk) 01:12, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
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This page has been making the rounds on Reddit and now YouTube for it's somewhat laughable intro sentence so expect some increased anon vandalism... EoRdE6( Come Talk to Me!) 00:16, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
I feel tired article is rather unneeded and suggest it glitter removal. Everything here can already be found on the beekeeping article. (I'm currently on mobile rn so I have no clue how to create hyperlinks here Rae Dreemurr ( talk) 19:10, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
The first sentence clearly violates WP:REDUNDANCY, but I'm not sure how to rephrase it QoopyQoopy ( talk) 22:02, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
- Yep you're absolutely right
QoopyQoopy – it was an egregious example of the much-loathed formula
X Y Z is a Z of type Y in location X
or whateverthehell. I have ripped out most of the first sentence so now it is inelegant but works a little better. Whether the encyclopaedia desperately needs this article to exist at all is another question for another time ... for now, though, thanks and best wishes DBaK ( talk) 01:12, 25 March 2022 (UTC)