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LOVI33 My pleasure and that would be great if you did, I'm not meaning to be trading reviews or anything since some may think that comes across as bias but it's not like we're going around asking each other to review things constantly so nah. --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
16:31, 6 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Infobox and lead
Cover art needs alt text parameter added
Remove hlist and switch order to
Digital download followed by
CD, since the digital release came first
"included as the album's fourth track" remove since this is not notable and is unsourced
"with the latter two handling the production and vocal production respectively" → "with the second and third of the three handling production and vocal production, respectively"
"was released through the singer's
independent record label, Dua Lipa Limited, as the second single from the album and" → "was released for
digital download through Dua Lipa Limited as the second single from the album on October 30, 2015, and"
"where she didn't have" → "on which she did not have"
"Its lyrics see Lipa begging for her muse" → "The lyrics see Lipa begging for her partner"
"as she could "be the one."" → "of romantic redemption"
"
music critics with many commenting on the song's production" → "
music critics, with many praising the production"
"Upon its release, it did not chart," → "Upon release, the song failed to chart;"
"by radio stations in Germany" → "by German radio stations"
"In 2017, the song entered the
UK Singles Chart, eventually peaking at number nine," → "In 2017, the song peaked at number nine on the
UK Singles Chart,"
Remove "at the time" since becoming does not necessarily indicate it remained at that rank forever
Not everything written out there is backed up the ref; add the other appropriate ones too here
Re-written to fit ref
"
Digital Farm Animals, and Jack Tarrant and given to Lipa by the former two" → "
Digital Farm Animals and Jack Tarrant, being given to Lipa by the former of the three" since I don't think comma is needed for three writers
"of two songs on" → "of the two songs on"
"At first, she was reluctant" → "Initially, she was reluctant"
"although, she formed" → "though Lipa ultimately formed"
"to get over it" → "to get over the fact"
"than songs she has" → "than that to ones she has"
"reminisces about when she" → "reminisces about having"
"in an interview" → "during an interview"
Add release year of "New Love" in brackets
"It was released on 30 October 2015" → "The song was released for
digital download as a
single on 30 October 2015" with the targets
"The song's intro follows a" → "The intro follows a"
"F–E♭–E♭maj7–F–Fsus4 while the rest" → "F–E♭–E♭maj7–F–Fsus4, while the rest" maybe I am not looking properly, but where is this on the source?
Source, the archived version probably doesn't show it but if you look at chords in the sample it shows this. Parts have a watermark but it disappears if you buy it.
LOVI3322:12, 7 July 2020 (UTC)reply
"has a airy production," → "has an airy production,"
"after a falling out" → "after a falling out with her boyfriend"
Done, I saw your Streaming edits, I am unsure if streaming should be included since this song was released in 2015. If I am wrong just re-add it.
LOVI3322:12, 7 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Critical reception
"received generally favourable reviews" → "was met with generally favourable reviews"
"called "Be the One" a standout on Dua Lipa comparing" → "called the song a standout on Dua Lipa and compared"
"as well as calling it" → "while she also called the song"
"In a separate The Line of Best Fit review," → "In a separate review for the same magazine,"
"The song additionally peaked inside the top 10 of 7 other European territories" → "In Europe, the song further peaked in the top 10 of..." then name the seven countries separately, since you can't cram that many refs at the end of the sentence
"peaking at number 6 and 20 respectively in Australia and New Zealand" → "peaking at number 6 and 20 in Australia and New Zealand, respectively"
"before its official radio impact on 21 March 2017" → "before it officially impacted radio on 21 March of that year"
"After its official American radio release, it" → "After the official US radio release, the track"
"the most added song," → "the most added song of the week,"
"and peaked atop the" → "and reached the summit of the"
Done
Music videos
""Be the One" videos." → "
music videos for "Be the One"" on the img main text, with the wikilink
""Be the One" was accompanied by two music videos." → "Two accompanying
music videos were released." with the wikilink
"The first video was directed by" → "The first was directed by"
"who also directed Lipa's video" → "who was also director of the video"
"It premiered through" → "The visual premiered through"
Remove target on Nylon
"In The Fader, Jeff Ihaza wrote "the [video] skips" → "Ihaza wrote the music video "skips"
"video "[compliments]" the song" → "video compliments the song" since it is an encyclopedic word
"and Vevo and features a" → "and Vevo, and features a"
"41,999
LEDs that generates" → "41,999
LEDs, which generates"
"It was made after Lipa saw fans" → "It was created after Lipa noticed fans"
"motel room. Lipa then storms out with Elgort following" → "motel room, followed by Lipa storming out while Elgort follows"
"empty motorway where flashback scenes" → "empty motorway, where flashback scenes"
[29] does not offer any mention of the Lexus IS
Removed.
The following sentence has no citation(s) at the end of it
Replaced
"Writing for V, William Defebaugh called the video "futuristic" and" → "For V, William Defebaugh called the music video "futuristic," while"
"called it "other-worldly"." → "described it as "other-worldly.""
Done
Live performances
"at the 2016
Eurosonic festival" → "at the
Eurosonic festival for that year"
LOVI33 Great job, the article is looking good right now; I just have a statement about the chart query. I don't believe the radio charts are notable since you have the main singles charts for Czech Republic and Slovakia, so why include those too? --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
18:38, 8 July 2020 (UTC)reply
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LOVI33 My pleasure and that would be great if you did, I'm not meaning to be trading reviews or anything since some may think that comes across as bias but it's not like we're going around asking each other to review things constantly so nah. --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
16:31, 6 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Infobox and lead
Cover art needs alt text parameter added
Remove hlist and switch order to
Digital download followed by
CD, since the digital release came first
"included as the album's fourth track" remove since this is not notable and is unsourced
"with the latter two handling the production and vocal production respectively" → "with the second and third of the three handling production and vocal production, respectively"
"was released through the singer's
independent record label, Dua Lipa Limited, as the second single from the album and" → "was released for
digital download through Dua Lipa Limited as the second single from the album on October 30, 2015, and"
"where she didn't have" → "on which she did not have"
"Its lyrics see Lipa begging for her muse" → "The lyrics see Lipa begging for her partner"
"as she could "be the one."" → "of romantic redemption"
"
music critics with many commenting on the song's production" → "
music critics, with many praising the production"
"Upon its release, it did not chart," → "Upon release, the song failed to chart;"
"by radio stations in Germany" → "by German radio stations"
"In 2017, the song entered the
UK Singles Chart, eventually peaking at number nine," → "In 2017, the song peaked at number nine on the
UK Singles Chart,"
Remove "at the time" since becoming does not necessarily indicate it remained at that rank forever
Not everything written out there is backed up the ref; add the other appropriate ones too here
Re-written to fit ref
"
Digital Farm Animals, and Jack Tarrant and given to Lipa by the former two" → "
Digital Farm Animals and Jack Tarrant, being given to Lipa by the former of the three" since I don't think comma is needed for three writers
"of two songs on" → "of the two songs on"
"At first, she was reluctant" → "Initially, she was reluctant"
"although, she formed" → "though Lipa ultimately formed"
"to get over it" → "to get over the fact"
"than songs she has" → "than that to ones she has"
"reminisces about when she" → "reminisces about having"
"in an interview" → "during an interview"
Add release year of "New Love" in brackets
"It was released on 30 October 2015" → "The song was released for
digital download as a
single on 30 October 2015" with the targets
"The song's intro follows a" → "The intro follows a"
"F–E♭–E♭maj7–F–Fsus4 while the rest" → "F–E♭–E♭maj7–F–Fsus4, while the rest" maybe I am not looking properly, but where is this on the source?
Source, the archived version probably doesn't show it but if you look at chords in the sample it shows this. Parts have a watermark but it disappears if you buy it.
LOVI3322:12, 7 July 2020 (UTC)reply
"has a airy production," → "has an airy production,"
"after a falling out" → "after a falling out with her boyfriend"
Done, I saw your Streaming edits, I am unsure if streaming should be included since this song was released in 2015. If I am wrong just re-add it.
LOVI3322:12, 7 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Critical reception
"received generally favourable reviews" → "was met with generally favourable reviews"
"called "Be the One" a standout on Dua Lipa comparing" → "called the song a standout on Dua Lipa and compared"
"as well as calling it" → "while she also called the song"
"In a separate The Line of Best Fit review," → "In a separate review for the same magazine,"
"The song additionally peaked inside the top 10 of 7 other European territories" → "In Europe, the song further peaked in the top 10 of..." then name the seven countries separately, since you can't cram that many refs at the end of the sentence
"peaking at number 6 and 20 respectively in Australia and New Zealand" → "peaking at number 6 and 20 in Australia and New Zealand, respectively"
"before its official radio impact on 21 March 2017" → "before it officially impacted radio on 21 March of that year"
"After its official American radio release, it" → "After the official US radio release, the track"
"the most added song," → "the most added song of the week,"
"and peaked atop the" → "and reached the summit of the"
Done
Music videos
""Be the One" videos." → "
music videos for "Be the One"" on the img main text, with the wikilink
""Be the One" was accompanied by two music videos." → "Two accompanying
music videos were released." with the wikilink
"The first video was directed by" → "The first was directed by"
"who also directed Lipa's video" → "who was also director of the video"
"It premiered through" → "The visual premiered through"
Remove target on Nylon
"In The Fader, Jeff Ihaza wrote "the [video] skips" → "Ihaza wrote the music video "skips"
"video "[compliments]" the song" → "video compliments the song" since it is an encyclopedic word
"and Vevo and features a" → "and Vevo, and features a"
"41,999
LEDs that generates" → "41,999
LEDs, which generates"
"It was made after Lipa saw fans" → "It was created after Lipa noticed fans"
"motel room. Lipa then storms out with Elgort following" → "motel room, followed by Lipa storming out while Elgort follows"
"empty motorway where flashback scenes" → "empty motorway, where flashback scenes"
[29] does not offer any mention of the Lexus IS
Removed.
The following sentence has no citation(s) at the end of it
Replaced
"Writing for V, William Defebaugh called the video "futuristic" and" → "For V, William Defebaugh called the music video "futuristic," while"
"called it "other-worldly"." → "described it as "other-worldly.""
Done
Live performances
"at the 2016
Eurosonic festival" → "at the
Eurosonic festival for that year"
LOVI33 Great job, the article is looking good right now; I just have a statement about the chart query. I don't believe the radio charts are notable since you have the main singles charts for Czech Republic and Slovakia, so why include those too? --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
18:38, 8 July 2020 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.