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Nominator: Soulbust ( talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Nkon21 ( talk · contribs) 04:22, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Hi there, I will review this within the next week. ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 04:22, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Soulbust: I'm sorry for the delay as I am juggling a couple GANs at the moment, but I plan to review this within this upcoming week! ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 15:08, 28 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Comments

• I would add the writers/producers, label, more info about the song's genre, recording process and development in the lead
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 06:00, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• One sentence paragraphs/lines in the article should generally be avoided
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 06:00, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• Add alt text to images

 Done, thanks to Dylan620 Soulbust ( talk) 07:00, 11 May 2024 (UTC) reply

• All refs should be archived
  • Done now as I ran the IAbot through the article
• lean heavily into → "lean more into", as this is not exactly traditional or mainstream pop
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:11, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• two studio albums Psychopomp (2016) and Soft Sounds from Another Planet (2017) → two studio albums, Psychopomp (2016) and Soft Sounds from Another Planet (2017),
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:06, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• were markedly noted by music critics and listeners as showcasing lead singer Michelle Zauner's personal grief. → were recognized by music critics and listeners for reflecting the personal grief of lead singer Michelle Zauner.
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:06, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• Add 2019 for the recording date in the infobox per the Pitchfork source
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:11, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• Release doesn't need its own section as it's only two sentences, so I would integrate it into the background and recording section
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:11, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• The track has been positively received by music writers → The song received positive reviews from music critics
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:01, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• Combine the two paragraphs in the critical reception
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:01, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• The magazine's Cat Zhang → Writing for the same publication, Cat Zhang
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:01, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• Zhang continued, stating the song → She felt that the song
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:01, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• in March → in March 2021
  •  Done, but seeing how "shortly after the single's release" followed up the March, and the March 2021 release date is aforementioned in article, was wondering if the "2021" was necessary? No real gripe, and fan of the clarification bc it's a different section, just genuinely pretty curious lol Soulbust ( talk) 05:24, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• The performance was filmed at the Brooklyn-based venue, National Sawdust. → The performance was filmed at the National Sawdust in Brooklyn, New York City.
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:24, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• album's release in June → album's release in June 2021
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:24, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• Stephen Thompson of NPR ranked Japanese Breakfast 11th of the 21 musical guest performances during the season. → Stephen Thompson from NPR ranked Japanese Breakfast number 11 out of the 21 musical guest performances during the season.
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:24, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• For their August 6 performance → August 6, 2022, performance at the
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:24, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• an 8-track an eight-track
  •  Done Soulbust ( talk) 05:24, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
• What does "an extra tip" for the Belgium chart mean?
  • Chart terminology sometimes trips me up or is silly in a way, but I'm pretty sure it's a reference to Ultratop#Ultratip chart. Kinda similar to the Bubbling Under Hot 100 chart in the U.S. Added wikilinks that I think help with clearing that up a bit. Soulbust ( talk) 05:24, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

On hold ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 17:57, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Soulbust Just to let you know, the one week mark passed a few days ago. Are you still interested in promoting this article? ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 08:08, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Hi yes! Definitely still interested. Just been particularly busy offline the past couple/few weeks. Will try to get to this within the next ~18-24 hours. Thank you! Soulbust ( talk) 04:54, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Hi Soulbust and Nkon21, just wanted to drop a quick note that I've added alt text to each image. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 23:35, 2 May 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Nkon21: Hi just pinging you to alert you that all comments have been addressed now :) Soulbust ( talk) 07:00, 11 May 2024 (UTC) reply

Thank you for letting me know, passing now ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 07:44, 11 May 2024 (UTC) reply