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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 08:59, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
I will get to this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 08:59, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- baggage train's garrison Garrison is generally used for the defenders of a static position, so I'd change this to defenders.
- I'd move this to the end of the sentence: within 17 days as I think it flows better there.
- and their allies'cavalry this ??
- Otherwise, nicely done.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 01:54, 10 December 2013 (UTC)
Ping-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 22:23, 13 December 2013 (UTC)
- As always, thanks for the review, and sorry that I forgot to respond earlier. The trouble-spots have been fixed. Cheers, Constantine ✍ 16:32, 16 December 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 08:59, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
I will get to this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 08:59, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- baggage train's garrison Garrison is generally used for the defenders of a static position, so I'd change this to defenders.
- I'd move this to the end of the sentence: within 17 days as I think it flows better there.
- and their allies'cavalry this ??
- Otherwise, nicely done.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 01:54, 10 December 2013 (UTC)
Ping-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 22:23, 13 December 2013 (UTC)
- As always, thanks for the review, and sorry that I forgot to respond earlier. The trouble-spots have been fixed. Cheers, Constantine ✍ 16:32, 16 December 2013 (UTC)