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I appreciate the enthusiasm for the topic, but please - review what has been written before publishing. Often, the content of the article has made absolutely no sense - for instance, the sentence,
"the Sudanese government announced the closure of the airspace of the country, which was initally only for to the international airport which already was enough for country's to suspend, leading the countries which had already suspended flights to finally have them suspended as a whole, on the same day casualties in the country almost doubled from 97 to 185 deaths, most of them were most likely in Nyala and Khartoum,"
is not just a run-on sentence, but one whose grammatical structure is almost completely incoherent. The persistent usage of commas rather than periods makes it come off as more rambling, rather than a proper sentence, and large chunks of it simply do not make grammatical sense ("which was initally only for to the international airport which already was enough for country's to suspend, leading the countries which had already suspended flights"). The above example is just one of many I've had to restructure today.
Feel free to edit, but please, please, run your content through some sort of grammar check before publishing. Otherwise, it keeps falling on us to clean it up. The Kip ( talk) 01:43, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
There is no information about the deaths of 4 UN workers and 1 Japanese in the sources. I didn't find this information even in a search engine. DBatura ( talk) 16:31, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
Someone added to the Belligerents section on the Sudan side: PFH (I don't know what the squiggle means, but there is a PKK flag next to it) and Wagner group and "Houti Jemen" were added to the Rapid Support Forces. In addition to the fact that this is without a source, I would like to mainly ask if the person is serious or if he is just a troll. Dr. Ivan Kučera ( talk) 09:56, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
Please there are thousands of pictures, I'll try posting free use but please anyone upload at least 3 pictures of the battle onto commons NYMan6 ( talk) 22:16, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
No one explained why this should be deleted so why? Oddballslover ( talk) 15:58, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
The sources do not indicate where they were killed. Perhaps they died not in Khartoum, but in other cities. DBatura ( talk) 10:25, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
April 15th and 23rd sections have been vandalized. 2600:1702:2B50:1370:E1C1:2616:D198:CAB ( talk) 22:29, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
The page has not been updated to reflect the developments over the past 3 weeks. Meanwhile, multiple sources report airstrikes and artillery fire in Khartoum (as recently as yesterday), e.g. The Guardian or Arab News. The article would benefit from being expanded. 2A02:AB04:2C2:E300:7C03:7CF:37CC:129E ( talk) 07:10, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Omdurman is part of greater Khartoum. There isn't really anything in the very short forked Omdurman page that couldn't be easily merged in to the Khartoum article. It makes more sense to cover the events as one topic, since we already cover most events in Omdurman in the Khartoum page, and they're two parts of the same larger battle for the capital. HappyWith ( talk) 15:49, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: not moved. ( closed by non-admin page mover) BilledMammal ( talk) 00:09, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
Only name. The article Siege of Mariupol is not called Siege of Mariupol (2022) because of the Battle of Mariupol (1919). Per WP:TITLEDAB, disambiguation is only necessary when there is otherwise an actual conflict in article titles. No such conflict in titles exists. Per WP:AT, concision is preferred over unnecessary precision. Parham wiki ( talk) 21:59, 21 August 2023 (UTC)— Relisting. —usernamekiran (talk) 22:50, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
If anyone could upload photos to this page, or even pictures of the Jeddah agreement and such, that would be amazing. As I'm filling this page out, I don't want it to become run on and blocky. Jebiguess ( talk) 02:39, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
We need a more detailed, neighbourhood-by-neighbourhood map of Khartoum itself, and the situation in the city (and suburbs, as well as preferrably Omdurman. 129.97.193.107 ( talk) 00:08, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
This is not only directed at Khartoum. It is also including areas like Bahri (Khartoum North), Omdurman, Tuti Island, Halfyat al Milk, Jebel Aulia and more. The name could be changed to the "Khartoum Campaign". SDUpdates32349 ( talk) 17:06, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
This page needs an update as the last one was in November 2023. If anyone could give some sources or even update to continue putting a good amount of information into this article that would be fantastic! Vamos Palmeiras ( talk) 21:05, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
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I appreciate the enthusiasm for the topic, but please - review what has been written before publishing. Often, the content of the article has made absolutely no sense - for instance, the sentence,
"the Sudanese government announced the closure of the airspace of the country, which was initally only for to the international airport which already was enough for country's to suspend, leading the countries which had already suspended flights to finally have them suspended as a whole, on the same day casualties in the country almost doubled from 97 to 185 deaths, most of them were most likely in Nyala and Khartoum,"
is not just a run-on sentence, but one whose grammatical structure is almost completely incoherent. The persistent usage of commas rather than periods makes it come off as more rambling, rather than a proper sentence, and large chunks of it simply do not make grammatical sense ("which was initally only for to the international airport which already was enough for country's to suspend, leading the countries which had already suspended flights"). The above example is just one of many I've had to restructure today.
Feel free to edit, but please, please, run your content through some sort of grammar check before publishing. Otherwise, it keeps falling on us to clean it up. The Kip ( talk) 01:43, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
There is no information about the deaths of 4 UN workers and 1 Japanese in the sources. I didn't find this information even in a search engine. DBatura ( talk) 16:31, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
Someone added to the Belligerents section on the Sudan side: PFH (I don't know what the squiggle means, but there is a PKK flag next to it) and Wagner group and "Houti Jemen" were added to the Rapid Support Forces. In addition to the fact that this is without a source, I would like to mainly ask if the person is serious or if he is just a troll. Dr. Ivan Kučera ( talk) 09:56, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
Please there are thousands of pictures, I'll try posting free use but please anyone upload at least 3 pictures of the battle onto commons NYMan6 ( talk) 22:16, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
No one explained why this should be deleted so why? Oddballslover ( talk) 15:58, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
The sources do not indicate where they were killed. Perhaps they died not in Khartoum, but in other cities. DBatura ( talk) 10:25, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
April 15th and 23rd sections have been vandalized. 2600:1702:2B50:1370:E1C1:2616:D198:CAB ( talk) 22:29, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
The page has not been updated to reflect the developments over the past 3 weeks. Meanwhile, multiple sources report airstrikes and artillery fire in Khartoum (as recently as yesterday), e.g. The Guardian or Arab News. The article would benefit from being expanded. 2A02:AB04:2C2:E300:7C03:7CF:37CC:129E ( talk) 07:10, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Omdurman is part of greater Khartoum. There isn't really anything in the very short forked Omdurman page that couldn't be easily merged in to the Khartoum article. It makes more sense to cover the events as one topic, since we already cover most events in Omdurman in the Khartoum page, and they're two parts of the same larger battle for the capital. HappyWith ( talk) 15:49, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: not moved. ( closed by non-admin page mover) BilledMammal ( talk) 00:09, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
Only name. The article Siege of Mariupol is not called Siege of Mariupol (2022) because of the Battle of Mariupol (1919). Per WP:TITLEDAB, disambiguation is only necessary when there is otherwise an actual conflict in article titles. No such conflict in titles exists. Per WP:AT, concision is preferred over unnecessary precision. Parham wiki ( talk) 21:59, 21 August 2023 (UTC)— Relisting. —usernamekiran (talk) 22:50, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
If anyone could upload photos to this page, or even pictures of the Jeddah agreement and such, that would be amazing. As I'm filling this page out, I don't want it to become run on and blocky. Jebiguess ( talk) 02:39, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
We need a more detailed, neighbourhood-by-neighbourhood map of Khartoum itself, and the situation in the city (and suburbs, as well as preferrably Omdurman. 129.97.193.107 ( talk) 00:08, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
This is not only directed at Khartoum. It is also including areas like Bahri (Khartoum North), Omdurman, Tuti Island, Halfyat al Milk, Jebel Aulia and more. The name could be changed to the "Khartoum Campaign". SDUpdates32349 ( talk) 17:06, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
This page needs an update as the last one was in November 2023. If anyone could give some sources or even update to continue putting a good amount of information into this article that would be fantastic! Vamos Palmeiras ( talk) 21:05, 3 June 2024 (UTC)