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In many respects, this is a B-Class article. The only real suggestion I would make at this point is that you may want too add a section titled "Aftermath" (or something similar), and use this to expand the last portion of the article. Carom 02:20, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
In consultation with the nominating editor, I have decided to fail the GA nom for the time being. The suggested improvements to this article are not terribly onerous (see above), but unfortunately the nominating editor has no time at present. When the suggestions are addressed at a later date, we will revisit this GA nom. Thanks... Ling.Nut 16:46, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
This article is quite good, but it needs just a little sprucing up.
Other suggestions (not necessary for GA):
If you have any questions about this review, let me know; otherwise, drop me a line on my talk page when you want me to re-review it. Awadewit | talk 20:59, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
The article "Simon de Montfort, 6th Earl of Leicester" claims Simon lost the support of the Welsh marcher lords due to his alliance with Llywelyn ap Gruffydd: "The reaction against his government was baronial rather than popular; and the Welsh Marcher Lords particularly resented Montfort's alliance with Llywelyn ap Gruffydd, Prince of Wales. Little consideration for English interests is shown in the Treaty of Pipton which sealed that alliance on June 22, 1265."
On the other hand, the article "Battle of Evesham" claims the alliance was forged after the marcher lords switch side: "With the lords of the Welsh Marches now in rebellion, Montfort solicited the aid of Llywelyn ap Gruffyd, the Prince of Wales".
Who is right?
Top.Squark 17:23, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
As part of the WikiProject Good Articles, we're doing sweeps to go over all of the current GAs and see if they still meet the GA criteria. I'm specifically going over all of the "Conflicts, battles and military exercises" articles. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. I made a few minor corrections, but there were no major problems with the article. If you have any questions, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have edited the article history to reflect this review. Regards, -- Nehrams2020 05:35, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
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I have changed the titles of the footnote sections to be more accurate.-- Kudpung ( talk) 03:48, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
In this article : /info/en/?search=The_Blind_Beggar , it is said that Henry become a blind beggar... but in this article, Henry is killed. Which one? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.195.8.58 ( talk) 09:53, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
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In many respects, this is a B-Class article. The only real suggestion I would make at this point is that you may want too add a section titled "Aftermath" (or something similar), and use this to expand the last portion of the article. Carom 02:20, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
In consultation with the nominating editor, I have decided to fail the GA nom for the time being. The suggested improvements to this article are not terribly onerous (see above), but unfortunately the nominating editor has no time at present. When the suggestions are addressed at a later date, we will revisit this GA nom. Thanks... Ling.Nut 16:46, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
This article is quite good, but it needs just a little sprucing up.
Other suggestions (not necessary for GA):
If you have any questions about this review, let me know; otherwise, drop me a line on my talk page when you want me to re-review it. Awadewit | talk 20:59, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
The article "Simon de Montfort, 6th Earl of Leicester" claims Simon lost the support of the Welsh marcher lords due to his alliance with Llywelyn ap Gruffydd: "The reaction against his government was baronial rather than popular; and the Welsh Marcher Lords particularly resented Montfort's alliance with Llywelyn ap Gruffydd, Prince of Wales. Little consideration for English interests is shown in the Treaty of Pipton which sealed that alliance on June 22, 1265."
On the other hand, the article "Battle of Evesham" claims the alliance was forged after the marcher lords switch side: "With the lords of the Welsh Marches now in rebellion, Montfort solicited the aid of Llywelyn ap Gruffyd, the Prince of Wales".
Who is right?
Top.Squark 17:23, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
As part of the WikiProject Good Articles, we're doing sweeps to go over all of the current GAs and see if they still meet the GA criteria. I'm specifically going over all of the "Conflicts, battles and military exercises" articles. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. I made a few minor corrections, but there were no major problems with the article. If you have any questions, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have edited the article history to reflect this review. Regards, -- Nehrams2020 05:35, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
A bot has added class=GA to the WikiProject banners on this page, as it's listed as a good article. If you see a mistake, please revert, and leave a note on the bot's talk page. Thanks, BOT Giggabot ( talk) 04:50, 10 December 2007 (UTC)
I have changed the titles of the footnote sections to be more accurate.-- Kudpung ( talk) 03:48, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
In this article : /info/en/?search=The_Blind_Beggar , it is said that Henry become a blind beggar... but in this article, Henry is killed. Which one? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.195.8.58 ( talk) 09:53, 11 April 2020 (UTC)