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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 00:15, 26 November 2018 (UTC) reply

I'll get to this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 00:15, 26 November 2018 (UTC) reply

• No DABs, external links fine.
• Images appropriately licensed.
• the deterioration of the English position in Flanders What does this refer to?

Rephrased to, hopefully, be clearer.

• Philip IV relied on his powerful navy typo?

Fixed. (Took me ages to spot it! I'm impressed that you did.

• Hyphenate: last minute repairs

Done.

• executed by the French king. The English discovered a proclamation from the French king too close in conjunction

Better?

• They then turned north and a month after the capture of Caen the English won the Battle of Blanchetaque Missing some commas

D'oh!. Fixed.

• Short and sweet.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 19:39, 21 December 2018 (UTC) reply

Hi Sturmvogel 66, you are clearly a glutton for punishment. Points above all addressed. Gog the Mild ( talk) 20:42, 21 December 2018 (UTC) reply