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Reviewer: Djmaschek ( talk · contribs) 04:02, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
I've skimmed the article and it looks pretty good. I will dig into it later. But first, I noticed that the times of day are inconsistent. In Battle, paragraphs 1-2, you use "8 a.m.", "3 a.m." and "6 a.m.". Later, in Battle, paragraphs 2-3 you use "13:00 p.m." and "17:00 p.m." which is very confusing. Please use either am/pm time or military time: "17:00" or "17:00 hours". Thanks. Djmaschek ( talk) 04:02, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
Here are my review comments. Please fix or argue your case if you disagree. Djmaschek ( talk) 01:21, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
@ Catlemur: Here is an explanation of the three times that I wrote, "This is not a sentence." I hope this helps. Djmaschek ( talk) 04:43, 10 November 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Djmaschek ( talk · contribs) 04:02, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
I've skimmed the article and it looks pretty good. I will dig into it later. But first, I noticed that the times of day are inconsistent. In Battle, paragraphs 1-2, you use "8 a.m.", "3 a.m." and "6 a.m.". Later, in Battle, paragraphs 2-3 you use "13:00 p.m." and "17:00 p.m." which is very confusing. Please use either am/pm time or military time: "17:00" or "17:00 hours". Thanks. Djmaschek ( talk) 04:02, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
Here are my review comments. Please fix or argue your case if you disagree. Djmaschek ( talk) 01:21, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
@ Catlemur: Here is an explanation of the three times that I wrote, "This is not a sentence." I hope this helps. Djmaschek ( talk) 04:43, 10 November 2022 (UTC)