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Abstracted this from existing articles, needs a polish though. Keith-264 ( talk) 14:33, 15 March 2015 (UTC)
The background material here seems good, but rather broad and extensive for this article about a single battle. I presume it was cut-n-pasted here by Keith-264, probably from the Background section of the overarching Western Desert Campaign page. I suggest this could be summarized in one brief paragraph, with a link to that Background section for the broader perspective.
Zulu Kane ( talk) 17:06, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
In this section, the acronym(?) "RTR" was used repeatedly, without having been previously used or explained or defined. I'm guessing it's an acronym for " Royal Tank Regiment". I've taken the liberty of linking the first mention of the "2nd RTR" and "1st RTR" to the (apparently appropriate) pages for the 2nd Royal Tank Regiment and 1st Royal Tank Regiment. Of course, if "RTR" means something else, please correct and clarify.
Zulu Kane ( talk) 03:59, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
No info about the number of Italians killed and wounded in this battle?-- Olonia ( talk) 18:13, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
Were the OZ and Indians involved? Keith-264 ( talk) 23:23, 25 September 2017 (UTC)
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Abstracted this from existing articles, needs a polish though. Keith-264 ( talk) 14:33, 15 March 2015 (UTC)
The background material here seems good, but rather broad and extensive for this article about a single battle. I presume it was cut-n-pasted here by Keith-264, probably from the Background section of the overarching Western Desert Campaign page. I suggest this could be summarized in one brief paragraph, with a link to that Background section for the broader perspective.
Zulu Kane ( talk) 17:06, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
In this section, the acronym(?) "RTR" was used repeatedly, without having been previously used or explained or defined. I'm guessing it's an acronym for " Royal Tank Regiment". I've taken the liberty of linking the first mention of the "2nd RTR" and "1st RTR" to the (apparently appropriate) pages for the 2nd Royal Tank Regiment and 1st Royal Tank Regiment. Of course, if "RTR" means something else, please correct and clarify.
Zulu Kane ( talk) 03:59, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
No info about the number of Italians killed and wounded in this battle?-- Olonia ( talk) 18:13, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
Were the OZ and Indians involved? Keith-264 ( talk) 23:23, 25 September 2017 (UTC)