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It looks like this article has been needing a review for quite awhile, so I'll be reviewing it over the next few days. This is my first GA review, so if for some reason I think that it should fail I will instead ask for a second opinion to help make sure that I did the process correctly. You may contact me on
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I'm about halfway through the article so far, and there are a few things I thought I'd point out for improvement:
Other than those, things look good so far. - Drilnoth ( talk) 15:44, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
I have put the review on hold for 7 days or until it is improved enough to pass, whichever comes first. The improvements that are needed are described in the "Plot" section above. - Drilnoth ( talk) 13:24, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
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It looks like this article has been needing a review for quite awhile, so I'll be reviewing it over the next few days. This is my first GA review, so if for some reason I think that it should fail I will instead ask for a second opinion to help make sure that I did the process correctly. You may contact me on
my talk page if you have any comments or questions that should be directed specifically at me, rather than as a general part of the review process. -
Drilnoth (
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15:07, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
I'm about halfway through the article so far, and there are a few things I thought I'd point out for improvement:
Other than those, things look good so far. - Drilnoth ( talk) 15:44, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
I have put the review on hold for 7 days or until it is improved enough to pass, whichever comes first. The improvements that are needed are described in the "Plot" section above. - Drilnoth ( talk) 13:24, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria