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Reviewer: Nikkimaria ( talk) 14:16, 4 May 2011 (UTC) reply

Not listed - Unfortunately I don't feel this article currently meets the GA criteria. Here are some concerns:

• Given the length of the article, the lead should be at least 3 paragraphs per WP:LEAD
• The article needs more citations - a good rule of thumb is to include at least one per paragraph
• References need cleaning up - web citations need publisher and access dates, don't use bare URLs as citations, etc

The article as a whole is well-written, and with further work on referencing it should easily make GA status. Nikkimaria ( talk) 14:16, 4 May 2011 (UTC) reply