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"It was written by Dev alongside its producers, The Cataracs, who are also featured on the track." The sentence uses both past and present tense. Shouldn't it be all past tense? Same thing for "British rapper Tinie Tempah is featured on an official remix of "Bass Down Low" that was made for the song's release in the United Kingdom."
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Corruption in the debauchery, so that some of the readers (me included) who don't know what the work means, know what it means. Or link to the Wiktionary page like later on in the article, even better
"Six months later, the first song the they made together," the "the" could be removed.
You mentioned Niles Hollowell-Dhar and David Singer-Vine as the due that composed of
The Cataracs in the writing and release section, but The Cataracs were mentioned before in the background. Couldn't you move the names there?
Images: Both non-free images have appropriate tags, licenses and fair use rationales, ✓Pass
Comments
"It was written by Dev alongside its producers, The Cataracs, who are also featured on the track." The sentence uses both past and present tense. Shouldn't it be all past tense? Same thing for "British rapper Tinie Tempah is featured on an official remix of "Bass Down Low" that was made for the song's release in the United Kingdom."
Perhaps link
Corruption in the debauchery, so that some of the readers (me included) who don't know what the work means, know what it means. Or link to the Wiktionary page like later on in the article, even better
"Six months later, the first song the they made together," the "the" could be removed.
You mentioned Niles Hollowell-Dhar and David Singer-Vine as the due that composed of
The Cataracs in the writing and release section, but The Cataracs were mentioned before in the background. Couldn't you move the names there?