In circa 855, Bardas married This reads a little oddly; suggest dropping the "in".
Finally, in spring 866 Bardas began Missing comma after 866.
Now that I look at it more deeply, the phrasing of time in this paragraph could be clarified. Exactly when did Inderina get married to Basil? Early in 866, I suspect. And the "finally" presupposes a longer sequence of intermediate steps than just one. So I'd drop that and add early 866 for the marriage.
As usual, thanks for taking the time. I've rephrased a bit in the sentences in question, both for the dates and to clarify Bardas' position further, have a look.
Constantine ✍ 07:21, 18 March 2014 (UTC)reply
In circa 855, Bardas married This reads a little oddly; suggest dropping the "in".
Finally, in spring 866 Bardas began Missing comma after 866.
Now that I look at it more deeply, the phrasing of time in this paragraph could be clarified. Exactly when did Inderina get married to Basil? Early in 866, I suspect. And the "finally" presupposes a longer sequence of intermediate steps than just one. So I'd drop that and add early 866 for the marriage.
As usual, thanks for taking the time. I've rephrased a bit in the sentences in question, both for the dates and to clarify Bardas' position further, have a look.
Constantine ✍ 07:21, 18 March 2014 (UTC)reply