GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (
|
visual edit |
history) ·
Article talk (
|
history) ·
Watch
Reviewer: Titodutta ( talk · contribs) 01:06, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
That's all, hope to have a good discussion ahead!
Fix disambiguation links. I have tagged in the article! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:06, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
As of 12 June 2012, Obama's account ranked 6th in terms of followers with 16,505,044 followers the reference you have added actually odes not verify the statement, since it is an older document, I think editor here has written the number from directly Obama's Twitter profile, that's alright, but, ref 2, in that case is not very helpful! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:13, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Well, will it be possible anyhow to add a screenshot of the profile (in infobox) under fair use? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:15, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
I think there is some confusion. Are you using first letter cap or first letter small in the word "Twitter"?-- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:22, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
It is not directly related to this GA. But still, since there are multiple articles on "Twitter profiles" now on Wikipedia (and hopefully we'll create few/many more too, can you/anyone create a special infobox for this. Currently you are using Infobox website, but that is not the best choice here, for example "Users 16 million" it is confusing, should be "Follower 16 millions". It is better to write "Account created" than "Launched" etc. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:22, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Please add one or two citation in second part of lead. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:45, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Use either DMY or MDY! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:47, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Don't link article Obama/Barack Obama in every caption! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:02, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Add image alt in at least 1-2 images. See WP:ALT for help! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:50, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
1) Launched: March 5, 2007 @ 16:08:25– I have seen the reference but could not understand are they following (any) US time or UTC like Wikipedia? 2) Also is it necessary to add an @ there before time since we are using @ for Twitter "@ mentions"-- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:55, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
We have number of followers in article, can you add the number of accounts Barack Obamama'a account following? Obama's account is following more than a half million account. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:59, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Can you include number of tweets? As of June 12, 2012 there are 4,255 tweets in his accounts. If we can create an infobox it'll be easier to add these information! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 03:02, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
this article has spelled @WhiteHouse, but in Wikipedia article we have spelled @whitehouse. I don't know if Twitter mentions/tags are case sensitive, but, let's follow the reference! What do you think? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 03:06, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Can you add a stat table/(section) in the article, as it has been done here. We can add stat of every 3 months! Will it be possible? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:35, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
As of May 2012– what? Is it footnote of number of followers (there is not any star to indicate)? But, in lead you have written stat of June 12! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:37, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
He has been the subject of various controversies on Twitter. – this has been added in article lead, but, the word "controversy" has been used only twice (including this one). And after reading the article, I can not understand those "various controversies". Why don't you make it more clear or create a sub-section (h3) etc? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 21:48, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Can you put the first image of a section at right side and second image at left side? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 23:51, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
All three images are of July 6, 2011. It seems the article is on "Barack Obama on Twitter on July 06, 2011". -- Tito Dutta ✉ 23:53, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
You are using Twitter (first letter cap). The section title is inappropriate! Can you try to find a better name? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 23:56, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
File:Obama responding to tweets.jpg– it is not suitable in "Ranking" section! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 03:59, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Like Lady Gaga on Twitter article, can you add a graph in the article? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:01, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
I got your ping. The data is above. I will lay it out cleaner for you
History of an organization or nation etc– I can understand, but "History" of a Twitter profile sounds peculiar! Can you rename it? I have only suggestion at this moment "Timeline ". See if you can think any other alternative. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:12, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Launched on March 5, 2007 at 16:08:25 – this should be in History/Timeline (at least I as a reader want to see like this (that History section is starting with "the account was created...."), but it is in "Ranking" currently. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:12, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Copyright and category to be added in this image File:20120524 POTUS Tweeting cropped.jpg -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:05, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Can you rewrite the caption of File:Kanye-West-grabs-the-mic-2009-vma.jpg this image, don't start with "When"! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:46, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Ref 24 is broken in the article it needs to be corrected! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:09, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
Change positions of the images, currently it is L-R-L-R. You can change it to R-L-R-L! Currently it is creating indents in the beginning of (first two) sections! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
On May 23, 2010 Obama was fourth with about 4 million followers. – Obama was fourth or his account? And fourth in what? Clarification needed! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
administration and @barackobama is for his election campaign staff.– we are writing @BarackObama. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
The account is "run by #Obama2012 campaign staff. Tweets from the President are signed -bo." Although his staff does most of his tweeting, Obama became active on the account in June 2011, tweeting under his own initials. – Two consecutive sentences with "the account" making it difficult to understand which account? @WhiteHouse or @BarackObama? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
On January 5, 2009, Obama's campaign account was among several celebrity accounts that was hacked and hijacked. – can you mention in bracket which account – @WhiteHouse or @BarackObama? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
We have been discussing on having a unique infobox since infobox website is pretty useless here. I am starting a draft of infobox below. I have just added basic data in the infobox, we need to change styles/colours etc.There are lots of options to customize this template, Help me to modify this infobox. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 07:26, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Account created | March 5, 2007 16:08:25 [1] |
---|---|
Followers | 16.5 million |
Following | 677,188 |
Tweets | 4,239 tweets |
Profile URL |
www |
As of June 12, 2012 | |
I don't think I would include hacking incidents in the infobox.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 07:31, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
I really like the idea of creating an infobox specifically for Twitter accounts. I was going to suggest this earlier, but never got the change to do it. It should certainly include the Twitter bird in there somewhere. Statυs ( talk) 03:11, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
{{Infobox Twitter account | Username = Test | Image = example.jpg | Image_size = 250px | Caption = Screenshot of @BarackObama | Created = Date | Followers = Number | Following = Number | Tweets = Number | Updated = June 12, 2012 }}
Status has made some changes in codes. The infobox looks much better now! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:30, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
I have gone ahead and created the template here: {{ Infobox Twitter account}} Feel free to make any adjustments you find fit. Statυs ( talk) 05:01, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
"Twitter Presents Townhall @ the White House"
Obama has at various times held public forums in which he fielded questions posted on Twitter.
@BarackObama was followed by 7.4 million people, including 28 world leaders
Twitter is expected to have a modest but growing role in his political campaign.
The hacker robo-guessed the password of a Twitter administrator's account gaining access to other accounts
Decrease image size (350px >>250px) align right! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:25, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
You can find some information here–
Is this image File:Twitter Town Hall audience.jpg really important? If not remove this image! All I can understand in this image–some people have cell phones in hand! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:43, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
This is a very well written article on a difficult subject. The editor(s) have done an excellent job. I'll take some more time before doing the final assessment (will not be more than 24–48 hours) -- Tito Dutta ✉ 03:10, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (
|
visual edit |
history) ·
Article talk (
|
history) ·
Watch
Reviewer: Titodutta ( talk · contribs) 01:06, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
That's all, hope to have a good discussion ahead!
Fix disambiguation links. I have tagged in the article! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:06, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
As of 12 June 2012, Obama's account ranked 6th in terms of followers with 16,505,044 followers the reference you have added actually odes not verify the statement, since it is an older document, I think editor here has written the number from directly Obama's Twitter profile, that's alright, but, ref 2, in that case is not very helpful! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:13, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Well, will it be possible anyhow to add a screenshot of the profile (in infobox) under fair use? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:15, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
I think there is some confusion. Are you using first letter cap or first letter small in the word "Twitter"?-- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:22, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
It is not directly related to this GA. But still, since there are multiple articles on "Twitter profiles" now on Wikipedia (and hopefully we'll create few/many more too, can you/anyone create a special infobox for this. Currently you are using Infobox website, but that is not the best choice here, for example "Users 16 million" it is confusing, should be "Follower 16 millions". It is better to write "Account created" than "Launched" etc. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:22, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Please add one or two citation in second part of lead. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:45, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Use either DMY or MDY! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 01:47, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Don't link article Obama/Barack Obama in every caption! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:02, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Add image alt in at least 1-2 images. See WP:ALT for help! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:50, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
1) Launched: March 5, 2007 @ 16:08:25– I have seen the reference but could not understand are they following (any) US time or UTC like Wikipedia? 2) Also is it necessary to add an @ there before time since we are using @ for Twitter "@ mentions"-- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:55, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
We have number of followers in article, can you add the number of accounts Barack Obamama'a account following? Obama's account is following more than a half million account. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:59, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Can you include number of tweets? As of June 12, 2012 there are 4,255 tweets in his accounts. If we can create an infobox it'll be easier to add these information! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 03:02, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
this article has spelled @WhiteHouse, but in Wikipedia article we have spelled @whitehouse. I don't know if Twitter mentions/tags are case sensitive, but, let's follow the reference! What do you think? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 03:06, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Can you add a stat table/(section) in the article, as it has been done here. We can add stat of every 3 months! Will it be possible? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:35, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
As of May 2012– what? Is it footnote of number of followers (there is not any star to indicate)? But, in lead you have written stat of June 12! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:37, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
He has been the subject of various controversies on Twitter. – this has been added in article lead, but, the word "controversy" has been used only twice (including this one). And after reading the article, I can not understand those "various controversies". Why don't you make it more clear or create a sub-section (h3) etc? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 21:48, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
Can you put the first image of a section at right side and second image at left side? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 23:51, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
All three images are of July 6, 2011. It seems the article is on "Barack Obama on Twitter on July 06, 2011". -- Tito Dutta ✉ 23:53, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
You are using Twitter (first letter cap). The section title is inappropriate! Can you try to find a better name? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 23:56, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
File:Obama responding to tweets.jpg– it is not suitable in "Ranking" section! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 03:59, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Like Lady Gaga on Twitter article, can you add a graph in the article? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:01, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
I got your ping. The data is above. I will lay it out cleaner for you
History of an organization or nation etc– I can understand, but "History" of a Twitter profile sounds peculiar! Can you rename it? I have only suggestion at this moment "Timeline ". See if you can think any other alternative. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:12, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Launched on March 5, 2007 at 16:08:25 – this should be in History/Timeline (at least I as a reader want to see like this (that History section is starting with "the account was created...."), but it is in "Ranking" currently. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:12, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Copyright and category to be added in this image File:20120524 POTUS Tweeting cropped.jpg -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:05, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Can you rewrite the caption of File:Kanye-West-grabs-the-mic-2009-vma.jpg this image, don't start with "When"! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:46, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Ref 24 is broken in the article it needs to be corrected! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 05:09, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
Change positions of the images, currently it is L-R-L-R. You can change it to R-L-R-L! Currently it is creating indents in the beginning of (first two) sections! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
On May 23, 2010 Obama was fourth with about 4 million followers. – Obama was fourth or his account? And fourth in what? Clarification needed! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
administration and @barackobama is for his election campaign staff.– we are writing @BarackObama. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
The account is "run by #Obama2012 campaign staff. Tweets from the President are signed -bo." Although his staff does most of his tweeting, Obama became active on the account in June 2011, tweeting under his own initials. – Two consecutive sentences with "the account" making it difficult to understand which account? @WhiteHouse or @BarackObama? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
On January 5, 2009, Obama's campaign account was among several celebrity accounts that was hacked and hijacked. – can you mention in bracket which account – @WhiteHouse or @BarackObama? -- Tito Dutta ✉ 06:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
We have been discussing on having a unique infobox since infobox website is pretty useless here. I am starting a draft of infobox below. I have just added basic data in the infobox, we need to change styles/colours etc.There are lots of options to customize this template, Help me to modify this infobox. -- Tito Dutta ✉ 07:26, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
Account created | March 5, 2007 16:08:25 [1] |
---|---|
Followers | 16.5 million |
Following | 677,188 |
Tweets | 4,239 tweets |
Profile URL |
www |
As of June 12, 2012 | |
I don't think I would include hacking incidents in the infobox.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 07:31, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
I really like the idea of creating an infobox specifically for Twitter accounts. I was going to suggest this earlier, but never got the change to do it. It should certainly include the Twitter bird in there somewhere. Statυs ( talk) 03:11, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
{{Infobox Twitter account | Username = Test | Image = example.jpg | Image_size = 250px | Caption = Screenshot of @BarackObama | Created = Date | Followers = Number | Following = Number | Tweets = Number | Updated = June 12, 2012 }}
Status has made some changes in codes. The infobox looks much better now! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:30, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
I have gone ahead and created the template here: {{ Infobox Twitter account}} Feel free to make any adjustments you find fit. Statυs ( talk) 05:01, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
"Twitter Presents Townhall @ the White House"
Obama has at various times held public forums in which he fielded questions posted on Twitter.
@BarackObama was followed by 7.4 million people, including 28 world leaders
Twitter is expected to have a modest but growing role in his political campaign.
The hacker robo-guessed the password of a Twitter administrator's account gaining access to other accounts
Decrease image size (350px >>250px) align right! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 02:25, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
You can find some information here–
Is this image File:Twitter Town Hall audience.jpg really important? If not remove this image! All I can understand in this image–some people have cell phones in hand! -- Tito Dutta ✉ 04:43, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
This is a very well written article on a difficult subject. The editor(s) have done an excellent job. I'll take some more time before doing the final assessment (will not be more than 24–48 hours) -- Tito Dutta ✉ 03:10, 21 June 2012 (UTC)