Two featured bouts were featured on hmm. very very similar to Bad Blood 2003. Featured is repetitive.
WWE's brand, a storyline expansion of the promotion where employees are assigned to wrestling brands "{WWE's brand)" isn't a storyline expansion. Raw, SD, and ECW are but "WWE's brand" is not
I think I got it.
The main rivalry rivalry repetitive.
World Heavyweight championship capitalize the "c" in championship
On the May 24 episode of Raw, Triple H pleaded with Bischoff to lift Michaels suspension and reinstate him back in the roster, when did Michaels get suspended?
the roster were in unsuccessful in doing so. ---> the roster was unsuccessful in doing so.
The result of the fight gave Bischoff the authority to schedule how did the result of a fight give him authority?
He had enough with HBK and Triple H attacking each other, that he scheduled the HIAC match.
Explain that in the article iMatthew (
talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
So, your saying that this ---> "The result of the brawl between Michaels and Triple H gave Bischoff the authority to schedule Triple H and Michaels in a Hell in a Cell match at Bad Blood", isn't explained enough? -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
I'm just saying that it should be explained how he got the authority, but I guess it's fine. iMatthew (
talk) 23:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
I know what your trying to say, but Bischoff was the GM and had the authority to do whatever he wanted. -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 00:02, 8 September 2008 (UTC)reply
World Heavyweight championship again with the lowercase "c"
keep consistency with "championship" and "title" pick either "World Heavyweight Championship" or "the title"
[performed a chokeslam] lifted Eugene by the throat and slammed him down to the mat remove [performed a chokeslam] and end the link at "slammed"
Intercontinental champion the lowercase "c" again (twice more)
Intercontinental title keep consistency again (twice more)
remove ["killed off"]
explain a legend vs. legend killer match
This is what I wrote: "a match in which a veteran wrestler is scheduled in a match against a younger wrestler."
Remove this sentence "Back and forth action took place between Orton and Benjamin."
Intercontinental title again
Remove this sentence "The match was controlled by Victoria, Stratus, Lita, and Kim in several spots in the match."
Lita then drove Kim's head into the mat, as Lita went for the pin, Stratus rolled Lita up for the pinfall victory, thus Stratus' becoming Women's champion for a fifth time. run-on. split into two sentences.
Jargon for removal: feint leg drop
How should the sentence read?
Not sure, try to come up with a way to re-word it. iMatthew (
talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
World Heavyweight title, again
The Divas match and the Eugene/Coachman match are preliminary matches. Only the last two are main event matches, so change the first sentence of the WHC paragraph to the first main event match.
Triple H got the advantage, as he was able to counter a drop Michaels on his head do you meant "to counter AND drop Michaels on his head"
No, Triple H blocked a piledriver attempt from HBK.
Then fix it, as it reads poorly. "counter a drop Michaels" iMatthew (
talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
Two featured bouts were featured on hmm. very very similar to Bad Blood 2003. Featured is repetitive.
WWE's brand, a storyline expansion of the promotion where employees are assigned to wrestling brands "{WWE's brand)" isn't a storyline expansion. Raw, SD, and ECW are but "WWE's brand" is not
I think I got it.
The main rivalry rivalry repetitive.
World Heavyweight championship capitalize the "c" in championship
On the May 24 episode of Raw, Triple H pleaded with Bischoff to lift Michaels suspension and reinstate him back in the roster, when did Michaels get suspended?
the roster were in unsuccessful in doing so. ---> the roster was unsuccessful in doing so.
The result of the fight gave Bischoff the authority to schedule how did the result of a fight give him authority?
He had enough with HBK and Triple H attacking each other, that he scheduled the HIAC match.
Explain that in the article iMatthew (
talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
So, your saying that this ---> "The result of the brawl between Michaels and Triple H gave Bischoff the authority to schedule Triple H and Michaels in a Hell in a Cell match at Bad Blood", isn't explained enough? -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
I'm just saying that it should be explained how he got the authority, but I guess it's fine. iMatthew (
talk) 23:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
I know what your trying to say, but Bischoff was the GM and had the authority to do whatever he wanted. -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 00:02, 8 September 2008 (UTC)reply
World Heavyweight championship again with the lowercase "c"
keep consistency with "championship" and "title" pick either "World Heavyweight Championship" or "the title"
[performed a chokeslam] lifted Eugene by the throat and slammed him down to the mat remove [performed a chokeslam] and end the link at "slammed"
Intercontinental champion the lowercase "c" again (twice more)
Intercontinental title keep consistency again (twice more)
remove ["killed off"]
explain a legend vs. legend killer match
This is what I wrote: "a match in which a veteran wrestler is scheduled in a match against a younger wrestler."
Remove this sentence "Back and forth action took place between Orton and Benjamin."
Intercontinental title again
Remove this sentence "The match was controlled by Victoria, Stratus, Lita, and Kim in several spots in the match."
Lita then drove Kim's head into the mat, as Lita went for the pin, Stratus rolled Lita up for the pinfall victory, thus Stratus' becoming Women's champion for a fifth time. run-on. split into two sentences.
Jargon for removal: feint leg drop
How should the sentence read?
Not sure, try to come up with a way to re-word it. iMatthew (
talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
World Heavyweight title, again
The Divas match and the Eugene/Coachman match are preliminary matches. Only the last two are main event matches, so change the first sentence of the WHC paragraph to the first main event match.
Triple H got the advantage, as he was able to counter a drop Michaels on his head do you meant "to counter AND drop Michaels on his head"
No, Triple H blocked a piledriver attempt from HBK.
Then fix it, as it reads poorly. "counter a drop Michaels" iMatthew (
talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply