Image: Again, it doesn't really add, critically, to the article, so I'd remove it
Infobox: Any cite for the production number?
Lede: Fox -> "Fox network", but just link "Fox"
Lede: add who plays who in parenthesis after the characters in the intro, also, link characters, like Peter
Lede: This section uses the word 'episode' quite a bit. Maybe cut that down and mix it up, using 'entry', 'installment', etc
Production: add what season "420" was in
Production: "…that celebrities do not spawn wide…" I'm not sure this makes much sense. Trying "that celebrities do not feature wide"
Production: comma needed after "episodes of the seventh season"
Production: The entire third paragraph of this section is completely unsourced. Let's get some sources up in here
Cultural references: Make sure you explain what each reference is (book, film, etc?) Some readers might not know what Back to the Future or Ghost is
Cultural references: Period need after Back to the Future
Cultural references: "Another scene in the spa shows a reference to Ghost with representations of Patrick Swayze and Demi Moore as their characters from the film on top of Peter's back giving him a massage." -> "Another scene in the spa reference the Ghost; representations of the film's stars, Patrick Swayze and Demi Moore, are on top of Peter's back giving him a massage."
Cultural references: "filmd" -> "films"
Cultural references: "when Peter is reciting is "Power to Believe"" Reciting what? Also, does that song have a link/artist?
Cultural references: doesn't -> does not; watch contractions
Cultural references: Lost should be italicized
Reception: Add an explanation for what Nielsen ratings are
Reception: The lede says mixed ratings, but this part says mixed to negative. Make this consistent
Reception: Italicize The A.V. Club
Reception: Add a citation after every direct quote
References: Again, use consistent dating methods (either YYYY-MM-DD, or MM DD, YYYY)
References: Publisher on Ref. 1 should be Yahoo! TV
References: Remove 'Yahoo! TV' from the title of Ref. 1
References: Link
TV Guide and make it italicized on Ref. 8
References: On Ref. 10, the publisher should be
Zap2it (linked), and the work should be
TV by the Numbers (also linked)
References: Italicize The A.V. Club on Ref. 11
References: Fix dash issues on Ref 1 (make a normal dash, i.e. -, into an en dash, like this –)
References: There's some issues with double quotation marks on Refs. 7, 8, and 9. Quotes inside of quotes should use single quotation marks (i.e. "'Harry Potter' Is a Best-Seller")
Image: Again, it doesn't really add, critically, to the article, so I'd remove it
Infobox: Any cite for the production number?
Lede: Fox -> "Fox network", but just link "Fox"
Lede: add who plays who in parenthesis after the characters in the intro, also, link characters, like Peter
Lede: This section uses the word 'episode' quite a bit. Maybe cut that down and mix it up, using 'entry', 'installment', etc
Production: add what season "420" was in
Production: "…that celebrities do not spawn wide…" I'm not sure this makes much sense. Trying "that celebrities do not feature wide"
Production: comma needed after "episodes of the seventh season"
Production: The entire third paragraph of this section is completely unsourced. Let's get some sources up in here
Cultural references: Make sure you explain what each reference is (book, film, etc?) Some readers might not know what Back to the Future or Ghost is
Cultural references: Period need after Back to the Future
Cultural references: "Another scene in the spa shows a reference to Ghost with representations of Patrick Swayze and Demi Moore as their characters from the film on top of Peter's back giving him a massage." -> "Another scene in the spa reference the Ghost; representations of the film's stars, Patrick Swayze and Demi Moore, are on top of Peter's back giving him a massage."
Cultural references: "filmd" -> "films"
Cultural references: "when Peter is reciting is "Power to Believe"" Reciting what? Also, does that song have a link/artist?
Cultural references: doesn't -> does not; watch contractions
Cultural references: Lost should be italicized
Reception: Add an explanation for what Nielsen ratings are
Reception: The lede says mixed ratings, but this part says mixed to negative. Make this consistent
Reception: Italicize The A.V. Club
Reception: Add a citation after every direct quote
References: Again, use consistent dating methods (either YYYY-MM-DD, or MM DD, YYYY)
References: Publisher on Ref. 1 should be Yahoo! TV
References: Remove 'Yahoo! TV' from the title of Ref. 1
References: Link
TV Guide and make it italicized on Ref. 8
References: On Ref. 10, the publisher should be
Zap2it (linked), and the work should be
TV by the Numbers (also linked)
References: Italicize The A.V. Club on Ref. 11
References: Fix dash issues on Ref 1 (make a normal dash, i.e. -, into an en dash, like this –)
References: There's some issues with double quotation marks on Refs. 7, 8, and 9. Quotes inside of quotes should use single quotation marks (i.e. "'Harry Potter' Is a Best-Seller")