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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 ( talk · contribs) 18:07, 1 May 2020 (UTC) reply

1. It is reasonably well written.

1. a (prose): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a ( reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a ( major aspects): b ( focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ( appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: Pass

   Pass/Fail:

Review

Lead

• Are two references necessary to prove implemented on July 3, 2016?
  •  Removed

Route description and service

• Are four references necessary to prove to the Essex Street terminal in the Lower East Side of Manhattan?
  •  Removed

Current bus service

• Are six references necessary to prove which replaced the trolley terminal?
  •  Removed
• Is short-turn what you meant?
  •  Done

Fare evasion and safety issues

• Please define acronym MTA
  •  Done

History

• Are four references necessary to prove charged for transfer to the Reid Avenue Line
  •  Removed
• By 1994, service decreased by 21% since the late 1980s as ridership decreased due to competition from illegal van services, but as enforcement was increased in summer 1993, ridership increased by 20%. You could remove as ridership decreased as the word "decreased" is quite close together and it is a wordy sentence.
  •  Done
• Please add a reference at the end of return trip from the subway stop.
  •  Done

Select Bus Service

• 8 should be spelt out as eight
  •  Done
• Please define acronym DOT
  •  Done

References

• Reference #3 needs a publisher (NYT)
  •  Done
• Reference #4, #15, #26, #54, #60 are dead
  •  Done
• Reference #17 needs an access date
  •  Done
• Can you please clip reference #19, #22, #33, #34, #36, #38, #39, #40, #41, #43, #44, #46, #51
  •  Done
• Can #47 get a page number?
  •  Done

Easy pass. HickoryOughtShirt?4 ( talk) 23:43, 8 May 2020 (UTC) reply