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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 05:28, 12 March 2014 (UTC) reply

I'll get to this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 05:28, 12 March 2014 (UTC) reply

Thank you in advance. Sorry, I will be away for some days and I cannot edit before Tuesday. Borsoka ( talk) 02:50, 13 March 2014 (UTC) reply
  • No DABs.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • There are a couple of page numbers needed and a cite that need to be added.
  • A couple of your cites have pp. for single page numbers.
  • Need publisher for Kosztolnyik, not place of publication.
  • Why the equals sign in front of the translated titles?
  • Make sure that you capitalize "king" when referring to king of specific place.
  • because the Germans did not acquiesce in a marriage between Solomon and Judith—the sister of the young German monarch, Henry IV—unless Solomon's right to succeed his father change "unless" to "until".-- Sturmvogel 66

( talk) 18:07, 16 March 2014 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 05:28, 12 March 2014 (UTC) reply

I'll get to this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 05:28, 12 March 2014 (UTC) reply

Thank you in advance. Sorry, I will be away for some days and I cannot edit before Tuesday. Borsoka ( talk) 02:50, 13 March 2014 (UTC) reply
  • No DABs.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • There are a couple of page numbers needed and a cite that need to be added.
  • A couple of your cites have pp. for single page numbers.
  • Need publisher for Kosztolnyik, not place of publication.
  • Why the equals sign in front of the translated titles?
  • Make sure that you capitalize "king" when referring to king of specific place.
  • because the Germans did not acquiesce in a marriage between Solomon and Judith—the sister of the young German monarch, Henry IV—unless Solomon's right to succeed his father change "unless" to "until".-- Sturmvogel 66

( talk) 18:07, 16 March 2014 (UTC) reply


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