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Copy-editing is required. For example, "Born in Oshodi, Lagos State, Awojobi’s father, Chief Daniel Adekoya Awojobi, was a stationmaster at the Nigerian Railway who hailed from Ikorodu in Lagos State.". Here, the phrases are unconnected. You know, there is no relation of him/his father (I couldn't understand what you meant, please clarify) with his father being a stationmaster.
What's the point in having common wikilinks like
vibration and you know that a wikilink should point to the correct location. Such as, its completely nonsense to point "exceptionally and rarely awarded to a scholar under the age of forty" to "
Doctor of Science".
The lead should adequately summarize the content of the article.
The section headings are completely weird. You can't get anything out of it. (Please change them)
An image caption should only end with a full-stop if it forms a complete sentence.
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Copy-editing is required. For example, "Born in Oshodi, Lagos State, Awojobi’s father, Chief Daniel Adekoya Awojobi, was a stationmaster at the Nigerian Railway who hailed from Ikorodu in Lagos State.". Here, the phrases are unconnected. You know, there is no relation of him/his father (I couldn't understand what you meant, please clarify) with his father being a stationmaster.
What's the point in having common wikilinks like
vibration and you know that a wikilink should point to the correct location. Such as, its completely nonsense to point "exceptionally and rarely awarded to a scholar under the age of forty" to "
Doctor of Science".
The lead should adequately summarize the content of the article.
The section headings are completely weird. You can't get anything out of it. (Please change them)
An image caption should only end with a full-stop if it forms a complete sentence.
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.