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The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi), and takes 21 minutes.— remove comma
The adjacent stations are Cockburn Central railway station towards Perth,— remove comma
three person— hyphenate
announced it would built the station— "would build"
The station was planned to relieve pressure at Cockburn Central station, which has its carparks full at 7:11am, the earliest of any Mandurah line station.— Time needs a space, e.g.
7:11 amor
7:11 a.m.See MOS:TIME.
This increased the project's budget to $105 million,— remove comma
Main Roads was reluctant to approve the closures, with them only being approved the week before the first closure.— awkward them, maybe
Main Roads was reluctant to approve the closures, only doing so the week before the first closure?
...asbestos-containing material was discovered",— remove comma
10.56am— convert to colon, also see above on spacing
every 10 minutes on peak during weekdays,— remove comma
half-hourly, or hourly— remove comma
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The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi), and takes 21 minutes.to {
The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi). Takes 21 minutes.—
The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi) and takes 21 minutes.
But if it read The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi), and it takes 21 minutes.
, "It takes 21 minutes" is a separate sentence, so a comma is appropriate.
Putting on hold, Steelkamp, for repair of the copy changes, the Google Maps reference, the clear tag and an alt for the infobox image. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 23:23, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
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The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi), and takes 21 minutes.— remove comma
The adjacent stations are Cockburn Central railway station towards Perth,— remove comma
three person— hyphenate
announced it would built the station— "would build"
The station was planned to relieve pressure at Cockburn Central station, which has its carparks full at 7:11am, the earliest of any Mandurah line station.— Time needs a space, e.g.
7:11 amor
7:11 a.m.See MOS:TIME.
This increased the project's budget to $105 million,— remove comma
Main Roads was reluctant to approve the closures, with them only being approved the week before the first closure.— awkward them, maybe
Main Roads was reluctant to approve the closures, only doing so the week before the first closure?
...asbestos-containing material was discovered",— remove comma
10.56am— convert to colon, also see above on spacing
every 10 minutes on peak during weekdays,— remove comma
half-hourly, or hourly— remove comma
|alt=
parameter for the image in the header. The individual images are all alt-tagged and appropriately licensed.You will notice a lot of "remove comma". This is because you are using commas where no comma is called for because there is no joining of what could otherwise be two sentences with ", and". If you take this out, and you do not have two sentences, don't put the comma back in.
Using the lead section example:
The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi), and takes 21 minutes.to {
The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi). Takes 21 minutes.—
The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi) and takes 21 minutes.
But if it read The journey to Perth railway station is 23.8 kilometres (14.8 mi), and it takes 21 minutes.
, "It takes 21 minutes" is a separate sentence, so a comma is appropriate.
Putting on hold, Steelkamp, for repair of the copy changes, the Google Maps reference, the clear tag and an alt for the infobox image. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 23:23, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk)
12:08, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
Created by Steelkamp ( talk). Self-nominated at 10:18, 31 January 2022 (UTC).