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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose ( talk · contribs) 14:27, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
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Happy to discuss, or be challenged on, any of my review comments. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 14:27, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
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Biography
She had a relationship with the chief editor and became pregnant, causing a local scandal.- no issues
The ceremony was described as "the closest you can get to a state funeral."- maybe attrribute this quote? (Looks like the source is in Sweden's paper of record, so no issues with that.)
Career
this experience has been cited as an inspiration- worth mentioning who cited it?
one of the most beloved children's books in the world- we have one good source for this, which will do, but I wouldn't mind another good source added, given the nature of the claim.
While Lindgren almost immediately became a much appreciated writer, the irreverent attitude towards adult authority that distinguishes many of her characters has occasionally drawn the ire of some conservatives- no issues.
Politics
she attracted criticism from Social Democrats and even from her own colleagues,- I don't have access to the source and I was a bit unclear about who "her own colleagues" were in this context.
In 1979, a law was introduced in Sweden prohibiting violence against children- I can't see the source but it looks like Lindgren may be credited as an influence o that outcome; if so, the connection could be more explicit.
She spoke against corporal punishment of children.
feels like it could be worked into either the preceding of following sentences; but no change is required.
From 1985 to 1989, Lindgren wrote articles concerning animal protection and mass production in the Swedish magazines Expressen and Dagens Nyheter along with the veterinarian Kristina Forslund- the intended meaning is clear, but consider rewording
Honors and memorials
Illis quorum- optionally, add a few words in the text about what this is.
Its entry on Lindgren wasmakes it look like that's her entire entry, but I'm guessing it isn't.
Works
Many of her books have been translated into English by Joan Tate- not really supported by source used.
See also / Notes / Further reading / External links
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Infobox and lead
General
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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose ( talk · contribs) 14:27, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
(Criteria marked
are unassessed)
Happy to discuss, or be challenged on, any of my review comments. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 14:27, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
Copyvio check
Images
Biography
She had a relationship with the chief editor and became pregnant, causing a local scandal.- no issues
The ceremony was described as "the closest you can get to a state funeral."- maybe attrribute this quote? (Looks like the source is in Sweden's paper of record, so no issues with that.)
Career
this experience has been cited as an inspiration- worth mentioning who cited it?
one of the most beloved children's books in the world- we have one good source for this, which will do, but I wouldn't mind another good source added, given the nature of the claim.
While Lindgren almost immediately became a much appreciated writer, the irreverent attitude towards adult authority that distinguishes many of her characters has occasionally drawn the ire of some conservatives- no issues.
Politics
she attracted criticism from Social Democrats and even from her own colleagues,- I don't have access to the source and I was a bit unclear about who "her own colleagues" were in this context.
In 1979, a law was introduced in Sweden prohibiting violence against children- I can't see the source but it looks like Lindgren may be credited as an influence o that outcome; if so, the connection could be more explicit.
She spoke against corporal punishment of children.
feels like it could be worked into either the preceding of following sentences; but no change is required.
From 1985 to 1989, Lindgren wrote articles concerning animal protection and mass production in the Swedish magazines Expressen and Dagens Nyheter along with the veterinarian Kristina Forslund- the intended meaning is clear, but consider rewording
Honors and memorials
Illis quorum- optionally, add a few words in the text about what this is.
Its entry on Lindgren wasmakes it look like that's her entire entry, but I'm guessing it isn't.
Works
Many of her books have been translated into English by Joan Tate- not really supported by source used.
See also / Notes / Further reading / External links
Sources
Infobox and lead
General