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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ( talk · contribs) 04:01, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards,
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There are many concerns with the article. Firstly, I strongly believe that with the present information provided the article can hardly be a GA. you need to add more context regarding the construction, launching and commissioning dates, description, service history. Also there are too many sections. I would suggest merging "1.3.1.1" and "1.3.1.2". Also "1.3.2.1" and "1.3.2.2". The modifications section may be merged with the first one. I would like to more context on the service history especially. Also expand the lead, just two sentences is very small. Take care of units, they must be mentioned in full on first mention, and abbreviated from the next. What do you mean showing the flag? And projecting naval power? Project eh naval power to whom and why? bluejackets? Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ( talk • mail) 04:50, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ( talk · contribs) 04:01, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards,
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04:01, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
There are many concerns with the article. Firstly, I strongly believe that with the present information provided the article can hardly be a GA. you need to add more context regarding the construction, launching and commissioning dates, description, service history. Also there are too many sections. I would suggest merging "1.3.1.1" and "1.3.1.2". Also "1.3.2.1" and "1.3.2.2". The modifications section may be merged with the first one. I would like to more context on the service history especially. Also expand the lead, just two sentences is very small. Take care of units, they must be mentioned in full on first mention, and abbreviated from the next. What do you mean showing the flag? And projecting naval power? Project eh naval power to whom and why? bluejackets? Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ( talk • mail) 04:50, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
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