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Hi, I will be reviewing this article, per your request on my talk page, and will be adding comments below. Over all the article seems well structured and clearly written. I haven't fully checked out the article yet, but I will list some initial comments that strike me glancing through the article. These are fairly nit picky.
I will add further comments later. Also, I am willing to help you out with some prose editing, if that is OK with you, rather than give a long list of petty concerns here. It is a very interesting article. — Mattisse ( Talk) 18:44, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
I think this statement: "This movement was, in a sense, an amalgam of many different styles and movements of the early 20th century, including Neoclassical, Constructivism, Cubism, Modernism, Art Nouveau, and Futurism." is highly suspect. Art Deco may have been influenced by the movements, but I don't think it's well established as an amalgam. In fact Art Deco is in many ways a rejection of modernism (for example). ChildofMidnight ( talk) 06:54, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
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Hi, I will be reviewing this article, per your request on my talk page, and will be adding comments below. Over all the article seems well structured and clearly written. I haven't fully checked out the article yet, but I will list some initial comments that strike me glancing through the article. These are fairly nit picky.
I will add further comments later. Also, I am willing to help you out with some prose editing, if that is OK with you, rather than give a long list of petty concerns here. It is a very interesting article. — Mattisse ( Talk) 18:44, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
I think this statement: "This movement was, in a sense, an amalgam of many different styles and movements of the early 20th century, including Neoclassical, Constructivism, Cubism, Modernism, Art Nouveau, and Futurism." is highly suspect. Art Deco may have been influenced by the movements, but I don't think it's well established as an amalgam. In fact Art Deco is in many ways a rejection of modernism (for example). ChildofMidnight ( talk) 06:54, 18 November 2008 (UTC)