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I don't know if this information is truly necessary (neutral) information to the page:
2018: Headmaster Gareth Leechman signs a petition with the Anglican Church Diocese of Sydney to retain s 38(3) in the Sex Discrimination Act 1984 (Cth).
I deleted additional details about the act that weren't neutral, but perhaps the entire action should go.
Thanks for reviewing! -- Susan.Uttendorfsky ( talk) 16:02, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
Good day!
I have rewritten/reorganized the material and copyedited it as best I can (it being my own words). The article should be proofread or lightly copyedited to catch anything I missed.
Issues left to be resolved:
1. My previous comment about "2018: Headmaster Gareth Leechman signs a petition with the Anglican Church Diocese of Sydney to retain s 38(3) in the Sex Discrimination Act 1984 (Cth)." I left that one in, but deleted others. I also left in the one under the current headmaster: "In 2018, he signed a formal petition to retain s 38(3) in the Sex Discrimination Act 1984 (Cth)." Perhaps the first one should be deleted and this one left? I don't know.
2. I deleted moderately sized portions about this act.
3. The photo in the section HSC needs to be updated to show data from 2016-2021.
4. The current school tuition fees need to be updated.
I think that's all! Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions or issues. And please let me know if I've been overzealous in my rewriting/editing. I'm new here. :) -- Susan.Uttendorfsky ( talk) 13:33, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
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I don't know if this information is truly necessary (neutral) information to the page:
2018: Headmaster Gareth Leechman signs a petition with the Anglican Church Diocese of Sydney to retain s 38(3) in the Sex Discrimination Act 1984 (Cth).
I deleted additional details about the act that weren't neutral, but perhaps the entire action should go.
Thanks for reviewing! -- Susan.Uttendorfsky ( talk) 16:02, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
Good day!
I have rewritten/reorganized the material and copyedited it as best I can (it being my own words). The article should be proofread or lightly copyedited to catch anything I missed.
Issues left to be resolved:
1. My previous comment about "2018: Headmaster Gareth Leechman signs a petition with the Anglican Church Diocese of Sydney to retain s 38(3) in the Sex Discrimination Act 1984 (Cth)." I left that one in, but deleted others. I also left in the one under the current headmaster: "In 2018, he signed a formal petition to retain s 38(3) in the Sex Discrimination Act 1984 (Cth)." Perhaps the first one should be deleted and this one left? I don't know.
2. I deleted moderately sized portions about this act.
3. The photo in the section HSC needs to be updated to show data from 2016-2021.
4. The current school tuition fees need to be updated.
I think that's all! Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions or issues. And please let me know if I've been overzealous in my rewriting/editing. I'm new here. :) -- Susan.Uttendorfsky ( talk) 13:33, 23 March 2022 (UTC)