After attending several yeshivas – Can you link
yeshivas here? I know it is linked before, but it should be linked on the first mention. Most of our readers will not know what this is.
Done
the Working Group, an underground Jewish organization – The body paragraphs mention it was an opposition group, but there is no mention of it being underground/covert.
Reworded
Early life
Frieder was born in Prievidza, then part of the Austro-Hungarian Empire, – DOB is missing. It is mentioned in the lead/infobox, but unsourced in the body. Please add it somewhere in this section with an appropriate source.
Mentioned and cited.
then moving to Nové Mesto nad Váhom; – moving → moved
Rewrote
before the war – World War II, right? I would mention that instead, since I was confused if the independence mentioned in the lead was a "war" too.
Done
had a son, Gideon, born in 1937 and a daughter, born in 1940.[1][2][3] – Might sound a bit picky, but is there a way you can spread out the citations so they back up the exact sentences they support? Having [1][2][3] at the end isn't very helpful for readers who may want to know exactly what source supports what claim. Whenever possible, we should cite immediately after a claim, per
WP:PAIC.
Spread citations a bit.
The Holocaust
prewar acquaintence with Jozef Sivák, – Is the "with" intended? Or should it read "prewar acquaintance Jozef Sivák"? Also, please correct spelling acquaintence → acquaintance
This is correct, except the spelling which has been fixed
Postwar life and death
Armin had been slated to testify as the main witness – Armin → Frieder
I thought this is correct based on
Wikipedia:SAMESURNAME? Emanuel Frieder is mentioned in the previous sentence.
Sources
Is there a reason why some of the books don't have URLs? I found several
here,
here, and
here, to name a few.
I usually link to the url if I get the information from a free Google Books preview, but not otherwise, because it's not helpful to the reader seeking to verify the information.
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
After attending several yeshivas – Can you link
yeshivas here? I know it is linked before, but it should be linked on the first mention. Most of our readers will not know what this is.
Done
the Working Group, an underground Jewish organization – The body paragraphs mention it was an opposition group, but there is no mention of it being underground/covert.
Reworded
Early life
Frieder was born in Prievidza, then part of the Austro-Hungarian Empire, – DOB is missing. It is mentioned in the lead/infobox, but unsourced in the body. Please add it somewhere in this section with an appropriate source.
Mentioned and cited.
then moving to Nové Mesto nad Váhom; – moving → moved
Rewrote
before the war – World War II, right? I would mention that instead, since I was confused if the independence mentioned in the lead was a "war" too.
Done
had a son, Gideon, born in 1937 and a daughter, born in 1940.[1][2][3] – Might sound a bit picky, but is there a way you can spread out the citations so they back up the exact sentences they support? Having [1][2][3] at the end isn't very helpful for readers who may want to know exactly what source supports what claim. Whenever possible, we should cite immediately after a claim, per
WP:PAIC.
Spread citations a bit.
The Holocaust
prewar acquaintence with Jozef Sivák, – Is the "with" intended? Or should it read "prewar acquaintance Jozef Sivák"? Also, please correct spelling acquaintence → acquaintance
This is correct, except the spelling which has been fixed
Postwar life and death
Armin had been slated to testify as the main witness – Armin → Frieder
I thought this is correct based on
Wikipedia:SAMESURNAME? Emanuel Frieder is mentioned in the previous sentence.
Sources
Is there a reason why some of the books don't have URLs? I found several
here,
here, and
here, to name a few.
I usually link to the url if I get the information from a free Google Books preview, but not otherwise, because it's not helpful to the reader seeking to verify the information.
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.