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Reviewer: Mackensen ( talk · contribs) 22:28, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | ||
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | ||
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | ||
2c. it contains no original research. | ||
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | ||
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | ||
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | I added one missing caption and alt text. | |
7. Overall assessment. |
Hello Epicgenius ( talk · contribs), thanks for your work on this article. I hope to have comments for you shortly. Best, Mackensen (talk) 22:28, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
Question about this: "During the 1970s ridership at the station declined, from 1.1 million passengers in 1975 to 573,000 in 1979." The source has numbers for 1974–1979. 1975 represents a high point in ridership; it's not clear why. The 1974 number is closer to the 1979 number. What's interesting to me is that local ridership collapses but special ridership grows somewhat to compensate. Mackensen (talk) 04:04, 29 November 2016 (UTC)
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During the 1960s the extra fare was collected at special turnstiles at the three stations served by the special. Larger tokens were used
This passage is supported by no fewer than three inline citations, plus an endnote with another three inline citations. The MTA brochure is offline but accepted in good faith. There's an HTML comment indicating that nycsubway.org is reliable for this information, though not others. Why is it reliable, and which claims does it support? Mackensen (talk) 16:57, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
I think we're there and I'm passing the article. @ Epicgenius and Kew Gardens 613: thank you both for your hard work on this article (now I need an excuse to wander out that way some time!) Best, Mackensen (talk) 02:51, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | ||
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | ||
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | ||
2c. it contains no original research. | ||
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | ||
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | ||
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | I added one missing caption and alt text. | |
7. Overall assessment. |
Hello Epicgenius ( talk · contribs), thanks for your work on this article. I hope to have comments for you shortly. Best, Mackensen (talk) 22:28, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
Question about this: "During the 1970s ridership at the station declined, from 1.1 million passengers in 1975 to 573,000 in 1979." The source has numbers for 1974–1979. 1975 represents a high point in ridership; it's not clear why. The 1974 number is closer to the 1979 number. What's interesting to me is that local ridership collapses but special ridership grows somewhat to compensate. Mackensen (talk) 04:04, 29 November 2016 (UTC)
Next question:
During the 1960s the extra fare was collected at special turnstiles at the three stations served by the special. Larger tokens were used
This passage is supported by no fewer than three inline citations, plus an endnote with another three inline citations. The MTA brochure is offline but accepted in good faith. There's an HTML comment indicating that nycsubway.org is reliable for this information, though not others. Why is it reliable, and which claims does it support? Mackensen (talk) 16:57, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
I think we're there and I'm passing the article. @ Epicgenius and Kew Gardens 613: thank you both for your hard work on this article (now I need an excuse to wander out that way some time!) Best, Mackensen (talk) 02:51, 5 December 2016 (UTC)