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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 ( talk · contribs) 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- You may want to wikilink marine invertebrates User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- "strengthened by calcareous and other materials," I think "calcerous" is an adjective, so I'd say replace it with " calcium carbonate"
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- In the Diversity section, it sounds like the Octocorallia and Hexacorallia have already been discussed, but they haven't yet. Generally I like to put the phylogeny first to bring up all the broad overview stuff, and then move on into more specific branches later User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- If you wikilink something in the lead, you still have to wikilink it in the rest of the article on first mention (like with "polyp" and "species") User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- you need to work on your wikilinking, a lot of sciencey words (like "pedal disc" and "siphonoglyphs") aren't wikilinked on first mention User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- what exactly is "acontia"? User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Be careful when reshuffling sections to make sure everything is wikilinked correctly User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- The wikilinking business is difficult. I have removed some links that were duplicates and added some where the terms first appeared, but I have left some like "taxon" and "taxa", "symbiosis" and "symbiotic", "Antipatharia" and "black coral", and in the tables because I think they are needed. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 20 is incomplete User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- I can't complete it because Google Books is restricting which pages I can access. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 21 isn't done correctly User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Why is Rugosa in the table but not the other Paleozoic anthozoas? User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Because it is an important order of stony corals and is mentioned in the classification given above.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- But why is it more important than all the other Paleozoic anthozoans?
User:Dunkleosteus77 |
push to talk
17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Well the classification in the "Phylogeny" section is referenced to WoRMS and that recognises
Rugosa as a valid taxon but not
Tabulata or
Heliolitida. I will remove "Rugosa" if you like.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- No it's fine, I was just wondering User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 19:14, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Well the classification in the "Phylogeny" section is referenced to WoRMS and that recognises
Rugosa as a valid taxon but not
Tabulata or
Heliolitida. I will remove "Rugosa" if you like.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- But why is it more important than all the other Paleozoic anthozoans?
User:Dunkleosteus77 |
push to talk
17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Because it is an important order of stony corals and is mentioned in the classification given above.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 32 has a doi 10.1017/S1089332600000073
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 6 has a doi 10.5281/zenodo.180149 User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- you might want to be consistent on how you form the access dates (like choose between 24-7-17 and 24 July 2017)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 31 is missing authors User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- File:Giant Green Anemone.gif has a deadlink for the source line User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 19:14, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- I didn't know what to do about that so I replaced the image.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
18:11, 2 August 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 18:58, 3 August 2017 (UTC)
- I didn't know what to do about that so I replaced the image.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
18:11, 2 August 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 ( talk · contribs) 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- You may want to wikilink marine invertebrates User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- "strengthened by calcareous and other materials," I think "calcerous" is an adjective, so I'd say replace it with " calcium carbonate"
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- In the Diversity section, it sounds like the Octocorallia and Hexacorallia have already been discussed, but they haven't yet. Generally I like to put the phylogeny first to bring up all the broad overview stuff, and then move on into more specific branches later User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- If you wikilink something in the lead, you still have to wikilink it in the rest of the article on first mention (like with "polyp" and "species") User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- you need to work on your wikilinking, a lot of sciencey words (like "pedal disc" and "siphonoglyphs") aren't wikilinked on first mention User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- what exactly is "acontia"? User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Be careful when reshuffling sections to make sure everything is wikilinked correctly User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- The wikilinking business is difficult. I have removed some links that were duplicates and added some where the terms first appeared, but I have left some like "taxon" and "taxa", "symbiosis" and "symbiotic", "Antipatharia" and "black coral", and in the tables because I think they are needed. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 20 is incomplete User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- I can't complete it because Google Books is restricting which pages I can access. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 21 isn't done correctly User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Why is Rugosa in the table but not the other Paleozoic anthozoas? User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Because it is an important order of stony corals and is mentioned in the classification given above.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- But why is it more important than all the other Paleozoic anthozoans?
User:Dunkleosteus77 |
push to talk
17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Well the classification in the "Phylogeny" section is referenced to WoRMS and that recognises
Rugosa as a valid taxon but not
Tabulata or
Heliolitida. I will remove "Rugosa" if you like.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- No it's fine, I was just wondering User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 19:14, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Well the classification in the "Phylogeny" section is referenced to WoRMS and that recognises
Rugosa as a valid taxon but not
Tabulata or
Heliolitida. I will remove "Rugosa" if you like.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- But why is it more important than all the other Paleozoic anthozoans?
User:Dunkleosteus77 |
push to talk
17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Because it is an important order of stony corals and is mentioned in the classification given above.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 32 has a doi 10.1017/S1089332600000073
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 6 has a doi 10.5281/zenodo.180149 User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- you might want to be consistent on how you form the access dates (like choose between 24-7-17 and 24 July 2017)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- ref no. 31 is missing authors User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- File:Giant Green Anemone.gif has a deadlink for the source line User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk 19:14, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- I didn't know what to do about that so I replaced the image.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
18:11, 2 August 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 18:58, 3 August 2017 (UTC)
- I didn't know what to do about that so I replaced the image.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
18:11, 2 August 2017 (UTC)