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Reviewer: Moswento ( talk · contribs) 07:53, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
Before I actually do a proper review of this article, there is a serious problem with close paraphrasing (or in some cases wholesale copying). I've listed a few examples in the table below, although I have not checked if this list is exhaustive. Please can you address this issue before I continue with the review - and by checking, I mean checking every sentence in the article, not just what I've listed in the table. Moswento talky 08:20, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
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mostly recorded in 2012 all over the world: at Benante's home studio, in Ruston's New York studio, on the band's tour bus | The album was recorded in 2012 at different locations: at Benante's home studio, in Ruston's New York studio and during tour. |
The original idea was to record a few songs that could go with a deluxe “tour edition” of the group’s latest album, 2011′s Worship Music, but it couldn’t get it together in time. | The original idea was to record a few songs that would have been placed on a deluxe edition of their previous album, but the band didn't manage to finish the project in time |
When the group realized how many songs it had, it reached out to its U.S. and European labels who offered to put out Anthems as a stand-alone EP | when the band had recorded enough songs, they reached out to their US and European labels who offered to put out Anthems as a stand-alone EP |
Benante and artist Stephen Thompson have subtly redesigned each track’s original album cover art to "Anthrax" it. | Benante and artist Stephen Thompson have subtly redesigned each track’s original album cover art to “Anthrax” it. |
classic 1970s rock bands that influenced them | classic 1970s rock bands that influenced Anthrax. |
The first track released from Anthems was the cover of Rush’s “Anthem,” which received some critical feedback from critics. | The first track released from the EP was the cover of Rush’s "Anthem", which received some positive feedback from music critics. |
Drummer Charlie Benante explained about their selection of the Boston song, | Drummer Charlie Benante explained the selection of the Boston song |
If I understood you right, I should copy the sentences from the sources word-to-word as they appear there?-- Вик Ретлхед ( talk) 12:21, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Moswento ( talk · contribs) 07:53, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
Before I actually do a proper review of this article, there is a serious problem with close paraphrasing (or in some cases wholesale copying). I've listed a few examples in the table below, although I have not checked if this list is exhaustive. Please can you address this issue before I continue with the review - and by checking, I mean checking every sentence in the article, not just what I've listed in the table. Moswento talky 08:20, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
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mostly recorded in 2012 all over the world: at Benante's home studio, in Ruston's New York studio, on the band's tour bus | The album was recorded in 2012 at different locations: at Benante's home studio, in Ruston's New York studio and during tour. |
The original idea was to record a few songs that could go with a deluxe “tour edition” of the group’s latest album, 2011′s Worship Music, but it couldn’t get it together in time. | The original idea was to record a few songs that would have been placed on a deluxe edition of their previous album, but the band didn't manage to finish the project in time |
When the group realized how many songs it had, it reached out to its U.S. and European labels who offered to put out Anthems as a stand-alone EP | when the band had recorded enough songs, they reached out to their US and European labels who offered to put out Anthems as a stand-alone EP |
Benante and artist Stephen Thompson have subtly redesigned each track’s original album cover art to "Anthrax" it. | Benante and artist Stephen Thompson have subtly redesigned each track’s original album cover art to “Anthrax” it. |
classic 1970s rock bands that influenced them | classic 1970s rock bands that influenced Anthrax. |
The first track released from Anthems was the cover of Rush’s “Anthem,” which received some critical feedback from critics. | The first track released from the EP was the cover of Rush’s "Anthem", which received some positive feedback from music critics. |
Drummer Charlie Benante explained about their selection of the Boston song, | Drummer Charlie Benante explained the selection of the Boston song |
If I understood you right, I should copy the sentences from the sources word-to-word as they appear there?-- Вик Ретлхед ( talk) 12:21, 22 October 2013 (UTC)