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I am moving some references here from the article, in order to save them for future use - all of these are from sections that had no text at all, only a bunch of links. They can be added back to the article when\if text is written. Dawn Bard ( talk) 14:18, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
Economic Activities [1] [2] [3]
Deforestation [15]
Reforestation [18]
Andohahela National Park [19] [20] [21]
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I do no think that section titles should be wiki linked. Wiki links should be added within the article. ContributingCarol ( talk) 03:17, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewed this. My response is that the article is way too long for the typical reader. I hope its sponsoring editors will replace it with a much more concise summary piece and move the detail to other articles. Have pity on your readers!
Both the Androy and Anosy articles include, in their history sections, mention that in 1936 "The first sisal plantation near Amboasary is established by Établissements Gallois. Henri de Heaulme established his sisal plantation and the Berenty forest reserve." I'm trying to establish which region the Berenty reserve is in, and this ambiguity is not helpful. The reserve is (just) west of the Mandrare River, [4] which I think puts it in Androy. Anyone know for certain? Dave.Dunford ( talk) 16:15, 19 February 2013 (UTC)
As Dawn did above, I'd like to move some of the Anosy site to here pending it getting fleshed out as right now it's just placeholders:
Infrastructure
[10] [11] [11] [12] [13] [14] [15] [16] [17] [18] [19] [20] [21] [22] [23] [24] [25] [26] [27] [28] [29] [30]
[35] [36] [37] [38] [39] [40] [41] [42]
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I am moving some references here from the article, in order to save them for future use - all of these are from sections that had no text at all, only a bunch of links. They can be added back to the article when\if text is written. Dawn Bard ( talk) 14:18, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
Economic Activities [1] [2] [3]
Deforestation [15]
Reforestation [18]
Andohahela National Park [19] [20] [21]
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Reviewed this. My response is that the article is way too long for the typical reader. I hope its sponsoring editors will replace it with a much more concise summary piece and move the detail to other articles. Have pity on your readers!
Both the Androy and Anosy articles include, in their history sections, mention that in 1936 "The first sisal plantation near Amboasary is established by Établissements Gallois. Henri de Heaulme established his sisal plantation and the Berenty forest reserve." I'm trying to establish which region the Berenty reserve is in, and this ambiguity is not helpful. The reserve is (just) west of the Mandrare River, [4] which I think puts it in Androy. Anyone know for certain? Dave.Dunford ( talk) 16:15, 19 February 2013 (UTC)
As Dawn did above, I'd like to move some of the Anosy site to here pending it getting fleshed out as right now it's just placeholders:
Infrastructure
[10] [11] [11] [12] [13] [14] [15] [16] [17] [18] [19] [20] [21] [22] [23] [24] [25] [26] [27] [28] [29] [30]
[35] [36] [37] [38] [39] [40] [41] [42]
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