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On behalf of Anne Finucane and Bank of America via PR agency Group SJR, and as part of my work at Beutler Ink, I have drafted an expanded version of this Wikipedia article for community review. The current article is minimal, leaving much opportunity for improvement, and I've worked to create an accurate and neutral overview of her early life and education, career, and personal life, using Wikipedia-appropriate sourcing. I've aimed to expand this article based on the range of in-depth sources available about Ms. Finucane to give an encyclopedic overview of her life and work. In short, the draft includes new material about:
The draft also displays an infobox with a new photograph I've recently uploaded to Wikimedia Commons. (Bank of America has submitted a permissions email to OTRS, but the permissions hasn't been updated to reflect receipt of this yet.)
I am looking for an editor who is willing to review my proposed draft here, and copy over the markup appropriately. @ Edwardx: Since you created this stub, would you be interested in taking a look at the draft? I hope you'll find this is a quality biographical overview, and I'm happy to address any concerns or question here. If you're busy elsewhere, I may try reaching out to WikiProject Women in Red or WikiProject Women members for their feedback, given that the article seems to have been created as part of a WikiProject Women in Red contest. Thanks, Inkian Jason ( talk) 18:27, 12 March 2018 (UTC)
Victuallers ( talk) 11:40, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
thanks Victuallers ( talk) 16:32, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
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Hello again! On behalf of Ms. Finucane and Bank of America, I am requesting replacement of the current infobox image, which shows Ms. Finucane's side profile, with File:Anne Finucane.jpg, which was taken more recently and serves as a better illustration by showing her face on. Bank of America has already submitted a permissions email to OTRS, but the permissions hasn't been updated yet. I don't edit articles directly because of my COI, but I'm hoping a volunteer editor agrees this is an improvement and is willing to update the infobox. "Finucane in 2018" would be an appropriate caption. Thanks! Inkian Jason ( talk) 18:18, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
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Hello! My name is Paul and I work for Precision Strategies. I'd like to submit an edit request on behalf of Bank of America:
Under Early life and education, please change "was a lawyer who worked for the Boston Patriots and local banks" to "was general counsel to the Boston Patriots and local banks", per The Boston Globe ( February 5 and February 7, 2017), which say "Mr. Finucane who served as general counsel to the Boston Patriots..."
I have a couple additional requests as well, which I'll share later. @ L293D: I see you reviewed a request above, if you're willing to consider this one as well.
Thanks for reviewing and updating appropriately, PB Precision ( talk) 14:35, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
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@ Boredathome101: Thanks for your help above. I noticed there's a stray quotation mark in front of "was general counsel to the Boston Patriots and local banks", if you're able to remove. Thanks! I'd now like to submit a request to update the committees mentioned in the introduction and "Career in banking" section.
Currently, the introduction says:
I propose changing this to the following:
Here are sources to justify the change:
Similarly, the "Career in banking" section currently says:
I propose changing this to the following:
Thanks for reviewing and updating appropriately, PB Precision ( talk) 19:29, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
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I would like to propose another improvement to this Wikipedia article. The current Recognition section is comprehensive but fails to mention a few more recent rankings. Specifically, I propose adding mention of Fortune's Most Powerful Women rankings in 2018, 2019, and 2020, per these sources:
Again, I'm seeking to update the existing text, which only mentions the 2016 and 2017 lists. Additionally, I'd like to propose adding mention of this power couple ranking by Boston magazine to the Personal life section, after the first sentence which mentions Mike Barnicle. I'm open to alternative wording, but I have the following in mind: In 2012, Boston magazine included Finucane and Barnicle in a list of the city's "power couples". [1]
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I'm hoping Boredathome101 or another editor can update the article's text on my behalf. Thank you for reviewing! PB Precision ( talk) 15:22, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
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Related to the above request, I'd like to propose simplifying one specific sentence in the Recognition section for readability purposes.
Currently, the sentence says:
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I propose changing to the following:
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The latter version removes the specific list placements, but makes the sentence easier to read and otherwise conveys the same information to readers. All sources have been kept but I've bundled a few citations. I understand editors may prefer to keep the specific numbers, but if the details aren't required I'd appreciate someone updating the sentence on my behalf. I'm hoping User:LauritzT might be interested in reviewing. Thanks again!
There is transportation from Bank of America that I have some dues with the bank. Is this true or is it a fraud by some people? I hope you will reply to my email thomasfi6m@yahoo.com 41.235.231.88 ( talk) 08:07, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
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Hello! My name is Kathy and I have created a Wikipedia account to suggest updates to articles about clients as part of my consultancy, Bright Side of the Road. This article is outdated because Anne Finucane has retired from the vice chair role. I have some ideas for how to improve this page, so I will share suggestions here for others to review on my behalf.
There are some tense updates needed throughout the article, but to start, I would like to suggest an addition to the "Career in banking" section ( Anne_Finucane#Career_in_banking), after the sentence, "In September 2017, she led the Bank of America's European bank board", to note her retirement from the vice chair role:
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Even if this is considered a non-controversial update, I would ask other editors to review and update the article for me because of my conflict of interest. If there are any questions with this request, please let me know. Thank you! KMBrightSide ( talk) 20:19, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
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Hi all. As I've mentioned above, I have a conflict of interest related to this article, so wanted to see if there are any editors who would be able to help with updating it with a more complete overview of Anne Finucane's board positions and government appointments.
Right now, Anne_Finucane#Personal_life has the following text:
This text is not wrong, but it is out of date and incomplete. Here is a more up to date and complete overview of her board positions and memberships:
References
She also will continue to serve on the boards of CVS Health and Williams-Sonoma
I understand editors will decide which text to update and where it will live in the article, but I would gently ask editors to consider moving the board positions from the "Personal life" section to the "Career in banking" section, perhaps with a subhead of Board service and memberships. I've noticed board positions are often listed under these categories vs "personal life" for other senior business executives, such as Jane Fraser (executive) and Mellody Hobson.
As always, I defer to others on these updates given my conflict of interest, and am happy to answer questions as needed. Thanks so much. KMBrightSide ( talk) 01:11, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
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On behalf of Anne Finucane and Bank of America via PR agency Group SJR, and as part of my work at Beutler Ink, I have drafted an expanded version of this Wikipedia article for community review. The current article is minimal, leaving much opportunity for improvement, and I've worked to create an accurate and neutral overview of her early life and education, career, and personal life, using Wikipedia-appropriate sourcing. I've aimed to expand this article based on the range of in-depth sources available about Ms. Finucane to give an encyclopedic overview of her life and work. In short, the draft includes new material about:
The draft also displays an infobox with a new photograph I've recently uploaded to Wikimedia Commons. (Bank of America has submitted a permissions email to OTRS, but the permissions hasn't been updated to reflect receipt of this yet.)
I am looking for an editor who is willing to review my proposed draft here, and copy over the markup appropriately. @ Edwardx: Since you created this stub, would you be interested in taking a look at the draft? I hope you'll find this is a quality biographical overview, and I'm happy to address any concerns or question here. If you're busy elsewhere, I may try reaching out to WikiProject Women in Red or WikiProject Women members for their feedback, given that the article seems to have been created as part of a WikiProject Women in Red contest. Thanks, Inkian Jason ( talk) 18:27, 12 March 2018 (UTC)
Victuallers ( talk) 11:40, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
thanks Victuallers ( talk) 16:32, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello again! On behalf of Ms. Finucane and Bank of America, I am requesting replacement of the current infobox image, which shows Ms. Finucane's side profile, with File:Anne Finucane.jpg, which was taken more recently and serves as a better illustration by showing her face on. Bank of America has already submitted a permissions email to OTRS, but the permissions hasn't been updated yet. I don't edit articles directly because of my COI, but I'm hoping a volunteer editor agrees this is an improvement and is willing to update the infobox. "Finucane in 2018" would be an appropriate caption. Thanks! Inkian Jason ( talk) 18:18, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
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Hello! My name is Paul and I work for Precision Strategies. I'd like to submit an edit request on behalf of Bank of America:
Under Early life and education, please change "was a lawyer who worked for the Boston Patriots and local banks" to "was general counsel to the Boston Patriots and local banks", per The Boston Globe ( February 5 and February 7, 2017), which say "Mr. Finucane who served as general counsel to the Boston Patriots..."
I have a couple additional requests as well, which I'll share later. @ L293D: I see you reviewed a request above, if you're willing to consider this one as well.
Thanks for reviewing and updating appropriately, PB Precision ( talk) 14:35, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
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@ Boredathome101: Thanks for your help above. I noticed there's a stray quotation mark in front of "was general counsel to the Boston Patriots and local banks", if you're able to remove. Thanks! I'd now like to submit a request to update the committees mentioned in the introduction and "Career in banking" section.
Currently, the introduction says:
I propose changing this to the following:
Here are sources to justify the change:
Similarly, the "Career in banking" section currently says:
I propose changing this to the following:
Thanks for reviewing and updating appropriately, PB Precision ( talk) 19:29, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
I would like to propose another improvement to this Wikipedia article. The current Recognition section is comprehensive but fails to mention a few more recent rankings. Specifically, I propose adding mention of Fortune's Most Powerful Women rankings in 2018, 2019, and 2020, per these sources:
Again, I'm seeking to update the existing text, which only mentions the 2016 and 2017 lists. Additionally, I'd like to propose adding mention of this power couple ranking by Boston magazine to the Personal life section, after the first sentence which mentions Mike Barnicle. I'm open to alternative wording, but I have the following in mind: In 2012, Boston magazine included Finucane and Barnicle in a list of the city's "power couples". [1]
References
I'm hoping Boredathome101 or another editor can update the article's text on my behalf. Thank you for reviewing! PB Precision ( talk) 15:22, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Related to the above request, I'd like to propose simplifying one specific sentence in the Recognition section for readability purposes.
Currently, the sentence says:
References
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---|
References
|
I propose changing to the following:
References
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---|
References
|
The latter version removes the specific list placements, but makes the sentence easier to read and otherwise conveys the same information to readers. All sources have been kept but I've bundled a few citations. I understand editors may prefer to keep the specific numbers, but if the details aren't required I'd appreciate someone updating the sentence on my behalf. I'm hoping User:LauritzT might be interested in reviewing. Thanks again!
There is transportation from Bank of America that I have some dues with the bank. Is this true or is it a fraud by some people? I hope you will reply to my email thomasfi6m@yahoo.com 41.235.231.88 ( talk) 08:07, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
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Terms of Use require that editors disclose their "employer, client, and affiliation" with respect to any paid contribution; see
WP:PAID. For advice about reviewing paid contributions, see
WP:COIRESPONSE.
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Hello! My name is Kathy and I have created a Wikipedia account to suggest updates to articles about clients as part of my consultancy, Bright Side of the Road. This article is outdated because Anne Finucane has retired from the vice chair role. I have some ideas for how to improve this page, so I will share suggestions here for others to review on my behalf.
There are some tense updates needed throughout the article, but to start, I would like to suggest an addition to the "Career in banking" section ( Anne_Finucane#Career_in_banking), after the sentence, "In September 2017, she led the Bank of America's European bank board", to note her retirement from the vice chair role:
References
Even if this is considered a non-controversial update, I would ask other editors to review and update the article for me because of my conflict of interest. If there are any questions with this request, please let me know. Thank you! KMBrightSide ( talk) 20:19, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
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Hi all. As I've mentioned above, I have a conflict of interest related to this article, so wanted to see if there are any editors who would be able to help with updating it with a more complete overview of Anne Finucane's board positions and government appointments.
Right now, Anne_Finucane#Personal_life has the following text:
This text is not wrong, but it is out of date and incomplete. Here is a more up to date and complete overview of her board positions and memberships:
References
She also will continue to serve on the boards of CVS Health and Williams-Sonoma
I understand editors will decide which text to update and where it will live in the article, but I would gently ask editors to consider moving the board positions from the "Personal life" section to the "Career in banking" section, perhaps with a subhead of Board service and memberships. I've noticed board positions are often listed under these categories vs "personal life" for other senior business executives, such as Jane Fraser (executive) and Mellody Hobson.
As always, I defer to others on these updates given my conflict of interest, and am happy to answer questions as needed. Thanks so much. KMBrightSide ( talk) 01:11, 14 June 2024 (UTC)