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There are about 4-5 links which are just to different newspapers covering the same AJP story. Few of them really back up the key information in the sentences they reference.
London prophet (
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15:02, 4 September 2017 (UTC)reply
NPOV issues addressed
There were many issues with this article including:
- Use of multiple local papers covering the same story to create impression of more sources
- Use of very emotive language
- Information of campaigns that lack any notability - this article should not be a history of every action taken by a small animal rights group
- Discussion of use of FOI to "unveil" information that appears (and has done for a long time) freely on institutional websites. Further investigations suggests most of the these FOI requests were answered as links back to the respective websites.
- Broken links
I've tried to address this issue and slim this down into an article that respects the notability criteria and addresses key actions by the AJP.
London prophet (
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14:40, 7 February 2018 (UTC)reply
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There are about 4-5 links which are just to different newspapers covering the same AJP story. Few of them really back up the key information in the sentences they reference.
London prophet (
talk)
15:02, 4 September 2017 (UTC)reply
NPOV issues addressed
There were many issues with this article including:
- Use of multiple local papers covering the same story to create impression of more sources
- Use of very emotive language
- Information of campaigns that lack any notability - this article should not be a history of every action taken by a small animal rights group
- Discussion of use of FOI to "unveil" information that appears (and has done for a long time) freely on institutional websites. Further investigations suggests most of the these FOI requests were answered as links back to the respective websites.
- Broken links
I've tried to address this issue and slim this down into an article that respects the notability criteria and addresses key actions by the AJP.
London prophet (
talk)
14:40, 7 February 2018 (UTC)reply