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Prose and MoS
Lede
the catalogue of Filipino composers, change to a catalogue....
Martin Nievera, Jona Viray, Aicelle Santos, Maricris Garcia, and Kyla performed as guest acts., April de los Santos is missing.
Background and development
Early in her career, Regine Velasquez's music was rooted in Original Pilipino Music (OPM), which were dominated by "kundiman" ballads and bubblegum pop love songs., reword to less passive voice. Hyperlink OPM, kundiman, and bubblegum pop.
Synopsis and reception
The stage design looked like a tropical garden adorned with grass and trees. It resembled a scaled-down version of the Philippine landmark Luneta Park., reword to a more formal tone.
"Sinasamba Kita",, put comma inside of quotes.
This is a song title and not a sentence or phrase being quoted, so it should be outside. The MoS is If a quote ends in the middle of a sentence, we typically put a comma rather than a period at the end of the quote inside the quotation marks.Pseud 14 (
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14:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)reply
"Regine's endeavor to revive Original Pilipino Music is very much appreciated and should be applauded as a noble effort to rekindle interest in our rich musical heritage., put end quotation marks.
Set list
No issues, pass.
Shows
List of concerts, showing date, city, venue, and guest act, pluralize guest act and showing date, possibly omit or reword city and venue.
Please hyperlink the author of source [3] and [8] using Boy Abunda, and the author of source [4] to Aster Amoyo, using "author-link=Name of Wikipedia page for author".
Spotchecks
Earwig and manual check pass!
Images
Images have proper licenses.
Misc.
No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information on the topic.
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
I will be reviewing this article, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Good luck to the editors!
Arconning (
talk·contribs)
Prose and MoS
Lede
the catalogue of Filipino composers, change to a catalogue....
Martin Nievera, Jona Viray, Aicelle Santos, Maricris Garcia, and Kyla performed as guest acts., April de los Santos is missing.
Background and development
Early in her career, Regine Velasquez's music was rooted in Original Pilipino Music (OPM), which were dominated by "kundiman" ballads and bubblegum pop love songs., reword to less passive voice. Hyperlink OPM, kundiman, and bubblegum pop.
Synopsis and reception
The stage design looked like a tropical garden adorned with grass and trees. It resembled a scaled-down version of the Philippine landmark Luneta Park., reword to a more formal tone.
"Sinasamba Kita",, put comma inside of quotes.
This is a song title and not a sentence or phrase being quoted, so it should be outside. The MoS is If a quote ends in the middle of a sentence, we typically put a comma rather than a period at the end of the quote inside the quotation marks.Pseud 14 (
talk)
14:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)reply
"Regine's endeavor to revive Original Pilipino Music is very much appreciated and should be applauded as a noble effort to rekindle interest in our rich musical heritage., put end quotation marks.
Set list
No issues, pass.
Shows
List of concerts, showing date, city, venue, and guest act, pluralize guest act and showing date, possibly omit or reword city and venue.
Please hyperlink the author of source [3] and [8] using Boy Abunda, and the author of source [4] to Aster Amoyo, using "author-link=Name of Wikipedia page for author".
Spotchecks
Earwig and manual check pass!
Images
Images have proper licenses.
Misc.
No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information on the topic.
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.