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Reviewer: TheQ Editor ( talk · contribs) 00:11, 15 August 2014 (UTC) reply

Sorry, but this looks like a potential quick fail. I'll list the things the article needs to improve other than the NPOV problems. TheQ Editor (Talk) 00:11, 15 August 2014 (UTC) reply

• The lead is too short.
• main website is a dead link
• There are contractions in the article: don't, don't, haven't, isn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
• ref 27 needs accessdate

Other than that, I can't really say more until the NPOV problems are fixed. Then, I could do a final assessment of the article. TheQ Editor (Talk) 17:51, 15 August 2014 (UTC) reply