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I just did a peer review of your page and I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the content topics you picked, and I think your use of an image was helpful, I encourage that you use more images throughout the rest of your article as you develop it. I would also suggest that you make sure to keep your article neutral so that your article doesn't become an argumentative article. I think the layout of your article is organized and makes sense, keep it up! Ksaldan3 ( talk) 22:17, 27 February 2022 (UTC) reply

Wiki Education assignment: Archaeology of Southeast Asia

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 January 2022 and 18 March 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kbee2, Sarpayton ( article contribs). Peer reviewers: Ksaldan3, Jaypanda95, Mp3frog, Julie Foss.

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This is a great article, but it reads a bit more like a school essay than an encyclopedia page. The last section before the sources just a summary of the above sections. — Preceding unsigned comment added by IronRose26 ( talkcontribs) 18:56, 29 March 2022 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Peer Review

I just did a peer review of your page and I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the content topics you picked, and I think your use of an image was helpful, I encourage that you use more images throughout the rest of your article as you develop it. I would also suggest that you make sure to keep your article neutral so that your article doesn't become an argumentative article. I think the layout of your article is organized and makes sense, keep it up! Ksaldan3 ( talk) 22:17, 27 February 2022 (UTC) reply

Wiki Education assignment: Archaeology of Southeast Asia

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 January 2022 and 18 March 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kbee2, Sarpayton ( article contribs). Peer reviewers: Ksaldan3, Jaypanda95, Mp3frog, Julie Foss.

Style

This is a great article, but it reads a bit more like a school essay than an encyclopedia page. The last section before the sources just a summary of the above sections. — Preceding unsigned comment added by IronRose26 ( talkcontribs) 18:56, 29 March 2022 (UTC) reply


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