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And she hates Nordic child singer Midnattsol Kalea.She says,her latest song, Kem e eg is horrible. She says that,people should not listen this "extremely obscene song". And,she is fully fed up with Midnattsol Kalea
The sentences are awkward and clumsy. I see that this article is fairly new, so I would suggest looking at it in detail, and making it easier to read.
"As of 2007, she still lives there."
"Having moved to Sweden, she started figure skating as a hobby when she was six years old".
"She turned out to have some talent for it, since she won gold medals in it".
"It was in the recording studio where she was discovered and offered a commercial record deal".
It sounds like the writer is trying to be stylish, when he/she should just tell it like it is. Be concise, and state the obvious. Example: "Diamond moved to Sweden in [year/date] and started to learn figure-skating when she was six-years-old.[Reference] andreasegde 22:39, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
Sorry but it's a fail
She's a Swedish singer so I'm guessing your Swedish? as there were some English errors. My advice is try and avoid starting sentences with "She" so much and try connect the sentences instead of jumping to something new each one, an example
With paragraphs that start with "She," replace it with "Diamond" for better flow. If you need to clarify anything leave me a message on my talk page. The article has promise, no problems with references but needs someone who's primary language is English to give it a run-through. The article has GA potential, once you address these issues i could take another look if you like. M3tal H3ad 13:57, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
Hey, I have the following comments:
I'm failing the GA now due to the fact the article needs a serious copyedit. The above comments are just a few examples of what's wrong, but the whole article requires attention. Let me know if you'd like any further advice. The Rambling Man 10:37, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
If Amy prefers her birth name to remain unknown to the public as the article states (under section "Life Outside Music [2]) perhaps it should be considered for her birth name be removed from the info box.-- Harout72 19:12, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
Why are we calling it her ”birth name”? It is her real name and only name; she hasn’t had it changed. There is a big debate over this matter over on the Swedish page, where currently her name has been withheld. I’m glad to see the English page does list it, as it very well should. Bossk-Office 03:03, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
If someone doesn’t want her name disclosed to the public, then perhaps she shouldn’t devote her whole life to becoming a public figure. Bossk-Office ( talk) 00:54, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
I heard she sang the title song of Het Huis Anubis in Swedish. Here a reamke titled House of Anubis is played. So should I or shouldn't add this? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.255.14.38 ( talk) 13:07, 2 September 2011 (UTC)
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And she hates Nordic child singer Midnattsol Kalea.She says,her latest song, Kem e eg is horrible. She says that,people should not listen this "extremely obscene song". And,she is fully fed up with Midnattsol Kalea
The sentences are awkward and clumsy. I see that this article is fairly new, so I would suggest looking at it in detail, and making it easier to read.
"As of 2007, she still lives there."
"Having moved to Sweden, she started figure skating as a hobby when she was six years old".
"She turned out to have some talent for it, since she won gold medals in it".
"It was in the recording studio where she was discovered and offered a commercial record deal".
It sounds like the writer is trying to be stylish, when he/she should just tell it like it is. Be concise, and state the obvious. Example: "Diamond moved to Sweden in [year/date] and started to learn figure-skating when she was six-years-old.[Reference] andreasegde 22:39, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
Sorry but it's a fail
She's a Swedish singer so I'm guessing your Swedish? as there were some English errors. My advice is try and avoid starting sentences with "She" so much and try connect the sentences instead of jumping to something new each one, an example
With paragraphs that start with "She," replace it with "Diamond" for better flow. If you need to clarify anything leave me a message on my talk page. The article has promise, no problems with references but needs someone who's primary language is English to give it a run-through. The article has GA potential, once you address these issues i could take another look if you like. M3tal H3ad 13:57, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
Hey, I have the following comments:
I'm failing the GA now due to the fact the article needs a serious copyedit. The above comments are just a few examples of what's wrong, but the whole article requires attention. Let me know if you'd like any further advice. The Rambling Man 10:37, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
If Amy prefers her birth name to remain unknown to the public as the article states (under section "Life Outside Music [2]) perhaps it should be considered for her birth name be removed from the info box.-- Harout72 19:12, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
Why are we calling it her ”birth name”? It is her real name and only name; she hasn’t had it changed. There is a big debate over this matter over on the Swedish page, where currently her name has been withheld. I’m glad to see the English page does list it, as it very well should. Bossk-Office 03:03, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
If someone doesn’t want her name disclosed to the public, then perhaps she shouldn’t devote her whole life to becoming a public figure. Bossk-Office ( talk) 00:54, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
I heard she sang the title song of Het Huis Anubis in Swedish. Here a reamke titled House of Anubis is played. So should I or shouldn't add this? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.255.14.38 ( talk) 13:07, 2 September 2011 (UTC)
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