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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 16:48, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use Done, Fixed, Added, Not done, Doing..., or Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. — ♠Vami _IV†♠ 16:48, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
As this the first of the reviewee's articles that I have reviewed, they should note that I am a grammar pendant and will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. – ♠Vami _IV†♠ 16:48, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
American Bank Note had a capitalization of $10,000,000The link to capitalization goes to capitalization when it looks like it ought to go to Market capitalization.
It was expected that the Trinity Place plant would be sold.into the first paragraph and combined Paragraphs 2 and 3.
driven, a century later, byDelete these commas.
This caused a number of controversies with community organizations.Can you expand on this?
The Real Deal describesThe Real Deal should be italicized, since it's a magazine.
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Thank you to Genericusername57, Sailing moose, and Epicgenius for helpful reviews and assistance prior to officially submitting this for GA. -- RoySmith (talk) 00:59, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 16:48, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use Done, Fixed, Added, Not done, Doing..., or Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. — ♠Vami _IV†♠ 16:48, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
As this the first of the reviewee's articles that I have reviewed, they should note that I am a grammar pendant and will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. – ♠Vami _IV†♠ 16:48, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
American Bank Note had a capitalization of $10,000,000The link to capitalization goes to capitalization when it looks like it ought to go to Market capitalization.
It was expected that the Trinity Place plant would be sold.into the first paragraph and combined Paragraphs 2 and 3.
driven, a century later, byDelete these commas.
This caused a number of controversies with community organizations.Can you expand on this?
The Real Deal describesThe Real Deal should be italicized, since it's a magazine.
Good Article review progress box
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Thank you to Genericusername57, Sailing moose, and Epicgenius for helpful reviews and assistance prior to officially submitting this for GA. -- RoySmith (talk) 00:59, 20 April 2020 (UTC)