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Shouldn't it be listed as going to A-Class review first? not just straight to FA? Oh well... Just a thought. Dreamy 02:20, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
Amenhotep I is next on my agenda to expand, but it's going to be much harder to do than previous work, because I've hit so much conflicting data. The pharaohbox will look smaller when I get more info and it doesn't take the entire page, I suppose. Once I figure out the entire date conroversy I'll straighten that out. One question, is there any good source for that lybian invasion? I can't seem to find any. Thanatosimii 03:39, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
This article mentions 'barque' in at least two places, but the WP articles on 'barque' do not support this use. What gives here? Hmains 21:17, 29 December 2006 (UTC)
Pretty good, but lead needs to summarize the article better. Make it do so and at least two paragraphs. Rlevse 21:43, 14 January 2007 (UTC)
In my opinion (where this site has a lot of them) I would say that judging by the picture of him sitting next to the man that he is 8.5 feet tall.
This needs to be defined, or an article or redirect needs to be created for it. The term appears in the intro, but many readers will not know exactly what it refers to.-- ragesoss 06:05, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
Great article – I would only suggest changing the references, so that the bibliography data isn't repeated – so that
About the citation from Manetho, I found it in two places in the Loeb translation. They are:
Note: the tradition represented by the text Julius Africanus used states that Amenhotep I ruled 21 years. This discrepency may be due to rounding. (In Waddell's trans. at p. 111 ( George Syncellus' transcription of Africanus, frag. 52), p. 113 (Syncellus' transcription of Eusebius, frag. 53), & p. 117 (Armenian version of Eusebius, frag. 53) -- llywrch 02:38, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
This article has been reviewed as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. My only real issue with the article at this stage is the use of terms like "some sources" or "some historians". If they are important enough to be cited, they are important enough to be named. Otherwise good job. The article history has been updated to reflect this review. Regards, Jackyd101 ( talk) 00:28, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
Numerous links added to assist the non-specialist. Amitchell125 19:57, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
Wasn't he a son of Seqenenre Tao? That's what his page says. 94.66.59.214 ( talk) 08:23, 29 July 2023 (UTC)
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Shouldn't it be listed as going to A-Class review first? not just straight to FA? Oh well... Just a thought. Dreamy 02:20, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
Amenhotep I is next on my agenda to expand, but it's going to be much harder to do than previous work, because I've hit so much conflicting data. The pharaohbox will look smaller when I get more info and it doesn't take the entire page, I suppose. Once I figure out the entire date conroversy I'll straighten that out. One question, is there any good source for that lybian invasion? I can't seem to find any. Thanatosimii 03:39, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
This article mentions 'barque' in at least two places, but the WP articles on 'barque' do not support this use. What gives here? Hmains 21:17, 29 December 2006 (UTC)
Pretty good, but lead needs to summarize the article better. Make it do so and at least two paragraphs. Rlevse 21:43, 14 January 2007 (UTC)
In my opinion (where this site has a lot of them) I would say that judging by the picture of him sitting next to the man that he is 8.5 feet tall.
This needs to be defined, or an article or redirect needs to be created for it. The term appears in the intro, but many readers will not know exactly what it refers to.-- ragesoss 06:05, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
Great article – I would only suggest changing the references, so that the bibliography data isn't repeated – so that
About the citation from Manetho, I found it in two places in the Loeb translation. They are:
Note: the tradition represented by the text Julius Africanus used states that Amenhotep I ruled 21 years. This discrepency may be due to rounding. (In Waddell's trans. at p. 111 ( George Syncellus' transcription of Africanus, frag. 52), p. 113 (Syncellus' transcription of Eusebius, frag. 53), & p. 117 (Armenian version of Eusebius, frag. 53) -- llywrch 02:38, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
This article has been reviewed as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. My only real issue with the article at this stage is the use of terms like "some sources" or "some historians". If they are important enough to be cited, they are important enough to be named. Otherwise good job. The article history has been updated to reflect this review. Regards, Jackyd101 ( talk) 00:28, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
Numerous links added to assist the non-specialist. Amitchell125 19:57, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
Wasn't he a son of Seqenenre Tao? That's what his page says. 94.66.59.214 ( talk) 08:23, 29 July 2023 (UTC)