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Reviewer: Nineteen Ninety-Four guy ( talk · contribs) 08:17, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Will be taking this one; I enjoyed this movie.
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Hi, I have begun reviewing the article and just finished with the entire Production. Though I'm happy to announce that this section mostly pass the GA criteria, I feel like the following texts fail criterion 2b for being either unsourced or failing verification against source provided:
*In 2020, the COVID-19 pandemic in Los Angeles affected Bay's career and canceled his plans to shoot his next film, Black Five. He recalled telling his agent "Goddamnit, I just want to get out and shoot something fast. I'm tired of being locked up at home".
- The production also hired real trauma surgeons, firefighters, SWAT teams, snipers, and 52 LAPD officers for the shoot.
Will continue with the rest later. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy ( talk) 06:50, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
Okay, back to reviewing.
Sections from Release down to Reception pass criterion 2a. However, the following texts, while not necessarily unreferenced, need inline citations to maintain text-source integrity:
- The first trailer was shown at CinemaCon on August 25, 2021
- It was projected to gross $8–14 million from 3,412 theaters in its opening weekend
- The film made $3.2 million on its first day, including $700,000 from Thursday night previews
- Prose review
- Ambulance received mixed reviews from critics who saw it as a return to form for Bay, though the story drew occasional criticism. -> please copyedit for this to be "well written". This needs citation, too
- Ambulance has grossed $21.8 million -> fix double spacing in 21.8 million
- and the Winter Olympics as well as re-runs of The Big Bang Theory. -> place a comma before as well as
- Cam tries to convince Will to stop Danny to no avail -> comma before to no avail
- Wikilink B movie
- I believe there's one instance of "multiples [ sic] sources" inline that needs fixing
Would be happy to give this article a pass once these issues are resolved. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy ( talk) 06:57, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
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Nineteen Ninety-Four guy: Done.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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17:38, 16 May 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you. I'm happy with the changes overall, though I had to do some minor ones here in there. I'm therefore pleased to announce that this article has passed the Good Article criteria. It's well-written and sourced, broad, neutral, stable, and supported with licensed images. You may be interested in nominating the article for WP:DYK, as it's a newly-promoted GA. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy ( talk) 07:42, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Nineteen Ninety-Four guy ( talk · contribs) 08:17, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Will be taking this one; I enjoyed this movie.
Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (
talk)
08:17, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Hi, I have begun reviewing the article and just finished with the entire Production. Though I'm happy to announce that this section mostly pass the GA criteria, I feel like the following texts fail criterion 2b for being either unsourced or failing verification against source provided:
*In 2020, the COVID-19 pandemic in Los Angeles affected Bay's career and canceled his plans to shoot his next film, Black Five. He recalled telling his agent "Goddamnit, I just want to get out and shoot something fast. I'm tired of being locked up at home".
- The production also hired real trauma surgeons, firefighters, SWAT teams, snipers, and 52 LAPD officers for the shoot.
Will continue with the rest later. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy ( talk) 06:50, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
Okay, back to reviewing.
Sections from Release down to Reception pass criterion 2a. However, the following texts, while not necessarily unreferenced, need inline citations to maintain text-source integrity:
- The first trailer was shown at CinemaCon on August 25, 2021
- It was projected to gross $8–14 million from 3,412 theaters in its opening weekend
- The film made $3.2 million on its first day, including $700,000 from Thursday night previews
- Prose review
- Ambulance received mixed reviews from critics who saw it as a return to form for Bay, though the story drew occasional criticism. -> please copyedit for this to be "well written". This needs citation, too
- Ambulance has grossed $21.8 million -> fix double spacing in 21.8 million
- and the Winter Olympics as well as re-runs of The Big Bang Theory. -> place a comma before as well as
- Cam tries to convince Will to stop Danny to no avail -> comma before to no avail
- Wikilink B movie
- I believe there's one instance of "multiples [ sic] sources" inline that needs fixing
Would be happy to give this article a pass once these issues are resolved. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy ( talk) 06:57, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
- @
Nineteen Ninety-Four guy: Done.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
talk)
17:38, 16 May 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you. I'm happy with the changes overall, though I had to do some minor ones here in there. I'm therefore pleased to announce that this article has passed the Good Article criteria. It's well-written and sourced, broad, neutral, stable, and supported with licensed images. You may be interested in nominating the article for WP:DYK, as it's a newly-promoted GA. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy ( talk) 07:42, 19 May 2022 (UTC)