"he says he'll always be a part of her" - no contractions, please
Choose either US (here) or U.S. (charts)
"a record she passed in the near future" - rewmove
"five in New Zealand, seventeen in Australia and top twenty" → number five in New Zealand, number seventeen in Australia and in the top twenty
The second and third paragraphs should be swapped around
Can you included the recording and release info in the article's body?
Background and recording
You add Seal's last name in the quote, but not Dupri's. Either way, be consistent
Composition
The two sheet music notes are quite different. I'm not sure what to do here?
Rename section 'Composition and critical reception'
Chart performance
Italicise Billboard
"Always Be My Baby" stayed at two for four weeks" - number two
Official versions and remixes
"(Da Brat would later go on to rap on remixes of "Honey" (1997), "I Still Believe" (1998), "Heartbreaker" (1999), "Loverboy" (2001), and "4real4real", an international bonus track for Carey's album, E=MC².)" - is this needed? If so, remove from brackets and reference
"Dance remixes with re-recorded vocals were produced by David Morales and Satoshi Tomiie of Def Mix Productions. There was also a reggae remix featuring Lil Vicious." - source?
"The US single includes a song called "Slipping Away"" - is this a
B-side? If so, make this clear and add it to the infobox. Do you have a track listing?
"he says he'll always be a part of her" - no contractions, please
Choose either US (here) or U.S. (charts)
"a record she passed in the near future" - rewmove
"five in New Zealand, seventeen in Australia and top twenty" → number five in New Zealand, number seventeen in Australia and in the top twenty
The second and third paragraphs should be swapped around
Can you included the recording and release info in the article's body?
Background and recording
You add Seal's last name in the quote, but not Dupri's. Either way, be consistent
Composition
The two sheet music notes are quite different. I'm not sure what to do here?
Rename section 'Composition and critical reception'
Chart performance
Italicise Billboard
"Always Be My Baby" stayed at two for four weeks" - number two
Official versions and remixes
"(Da Brat would later go on to rap on remixes of "Honey" (1997), "I Still Believe" (1998), "Heartbreaker" (1999), "Loverboy" (2001), and "4real4real", an international bonus track for Carey's album, E=MC².)" - is this needed? If so, remove from brackets and reference
"Dance remixes with re-recorded vocals were produced by David Morales and Satoshi Tomiie of Def Mix Productions. There was also a reggae remix featuring Lil Vicious." - source?
"The US single includes a song called "Slipping Away"" - is this a
B-side? If so, make this clear and add it to the infobox. Do you have a track listing?