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The conceptual history section of this article has no conceptual history. It just talks about the casting and how good of an actor the guy is. Ophois ( talk) 19:17, 23 October 2009 (UTC)
Reviewer: JulieSpaulding ( talk) 14:06, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
Hello, I'm going to be reviewing this article, and I'll base my review off the Good Article criteria.
A good article is:
1. Well-written. (a) the prose is clear and the spelling and grammar are correct; and, (b) it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation.
Reasonably. However, I have these points to make:
I believe that this article does meet the last five criteria (although I'm not too sure about using only one web source that I can verify right now!).
Final decision:
I'm really sorry, but I don't think I can pass an article with these prose problems at the moment. If you get them fixed up soon, drop me a note on my user talk page and I'll swing by to review the article again so you don't have to wait forever at
WP:GAN.
JulieSpaulding (
talk) 14:50, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
When Alvin Kersh was first introduced in the X-Files series, he explained he was a military pilot in the Vietnam War. Prior to and after this was stated I noticed a United States Air Force Academy sabre display mounted on his wall in his office. I could see underneath that there was a United States Air Force Academy class shield within the display (I graduated there). This leads me to believe he was an Air Force pilot and not a Navy pilot. I couldn't tell what aircraft he displayed on the wall was, Air Force or Navy. If it was a Navy jet then this was a rift in the story line. I don't think many USAFA graduates back then went to the Navy. Don't ask me how I caught this. I couldn't believe I saw the class shield in the first place.
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Reviewer: Eshlare ( talk · contribs) 23:42, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
I will review this soon. Eshlare ( talk) 23:42, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
Comments:
Image:
I think a closer crop would look better. Or perhaps this image from the same source. A full body shot doesn't add anything, and doesn't look as tidy, especially since the costume isn't notable. That's just a personal aesthetic view and not a criticism.
Lead:
Character Arc
Production
Reception
On Hold
Aside from the concerns raised, this article is adequately written and has the required layout, format and structure of an article about an element of fiction. It's on hold for seven days, which I am happy to extend if progress is being made. Eshlare ( talk) 17:16, 5 June 2012 (UTC)
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The conceptual history section of this article has no conceptual history. It just talks about the casting and how good of an actor the guy is. Ophois ( talk) 19:17, 23 October 2009 (UTC)
Reviewer: JulieSpaulding ( talk) 14:06, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
Hello, I'm going to be reviewing this article, and I'll base my review off the Good Article criteria.
A good article is:
1. Well-written. (a) the prose is clear and the spelling and grammar are correct; and, (b) it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation.
Reasonably. However, I have these points to make:
I believe that this article does meet the last five criteria (although I'm not too sure about using only one web source that I can verify right now!).
Final decision:
I'm really sorry, but I don't think I can pass an article with these prose problems at the moment. If you get them fixed up soon, drop me a note on my user talk page and I'll swing by to review the article again so you don't have to wait forever at
WP:GAN.
JulieSpaulding (
talk) 14:50, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
When Alvin Kersh was first introduced in the X-Files series, he explained he was a military pilot in the Vietnam War. Prior to and after this was stated I noticed a United States Air Force Academy sabre display mounted on his wall in his office. I could see underneath that there was a United States Air Force Academy class shield within the display (I graduated there). This leads me to believe he was an Air Force pilot and not a Navy pilot. I couldn't tell what aircraft he displayed on the wall was, Air Force or Navy. If it was a Navy jet then this was a rift in the story line. I don't think many USAFA graduates back then went to the Navy. Don't ask me how I caught this. I couldn't believe I saw the class shield in the first place.
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Reviewer: Eshlare ( talk · contribs) 23:42, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
I will review this soon. Eshlare ( talk) 23:42, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
Comments:
Image:
I think a closer crop would look better. Or perhaps this image from the same source. A full body shot doesn't add anything, and doesn't look as tidy, especially since the costume isn't notable. That's just a personal aesthetic view and not a criticism.
Lead:
Character Arc
Production
Reception
On Hold
Aside from the concerns raised, this article is adequately written and has the required layout, format and structure of an article about an element of fiction. It's on hold for seven days, which I am happy to extend if progress is being made. Eshlare ( talk) 17:16, 5 June 2012 (UTC)
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