Image is good. That is really interesting that Bowman's trading cards fell into PD.
References are good, spotcheck reveals they support their statements; no issues with close paraphrasing
Lead
Seems odd that being a member of a World Series champion is not listed in the lead
Minor leagues
"where he spent the season as the team's second baseman and played with future teammate Vic Raschi." - Odd to state that he was playing with a future teammate since the two were obviously also current teammates. Perhaps specify future major league teammate?
Major leagues
We are told that Clark played in the 1947 World Series, but we aren't told the result of the series.
Likewise, we're informed of the 1948 tiebreaker, but the result is only implied, and again, being on the 1948 World Series champ is not noted.
Overall
Obviously, only a very minor concern about specifically noting he was on WS winning teams. I just want to get your thought on this before passing the article. Regards,
Resolute23:10, 22 September 2012 (UTC)reply
Image is good. That is really interesting that Bowman's trading cards fell into PD.
References are good, spotcheck reveals they support their statements; no issues with close paraphrasing
Lead
Seems odd that being a member of a World Series champion is not listed in the lead
Minor leagues
"where he spent the season as the team's second baseman and played with future teammate Vic Raschi." - Odd to state that he was playing with a future teammate since the two were obviously also current teammates. Perhaps specify future major league teammate?
Major leagues
We are told that Clark played in the 1947 World Series, but we aren't told the result of the series.
Likewise, we're informed of the 1948 tiebreaker, but the result is only implied, and again, being on the 1948 World Series champ is not noted.
Overall
Obviously, only a very minor concern about specifically noting he was on WS winning teams. I just want to get your thought on this before passing the article. Regards,
Resolute23:10, 22 September 2012 (UTC)reply