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"All the Lovers" was certified gold in Australia and Italy, and silver in the United Kingdom. → Wouldn't you put silver then gold?
The lead is quote long, it shouldn't have four paragraphs.
Critical reception section, especially the first paragraph, is really big. It's a
WP:QUOTEFARM
Commercial performance section is a bit all over the place. One tiny paragraph, followed by a huge one, then two more tiny paragraphs. It doesn't look very proportionate or clear. It needs refining. Three paragraphs of the same length would be best here.
I have made some changes, sorting the paragraphs in this order - 1) Minogue's two main audiences- Australia and the UK. 2) Europe 3) North America
Same for Development and release, the paragraphing looks unbalanced. I always try to make sure paragraphs in the same section are of the same length.
Synopsis and analysis, the quote at the end is already a block quote, so quotation marks aren't needed.
Reception section, it's so small there's really no point having a single line paragraph. Just make it all one para.
Ref 7: Official Charts Company, not Official Charts
There doesn't look like many points here, but some of them are quite big ones, as some section need some work done on them. On hold. —
₳aron 11
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
"All the Lovers" was certified gold in Australia and Italy, and silver in the United Kingdom. → Wouldn't you put silver then gold?
The lead is quote long, it shouldn't have four paragraphs.
Critical reception section, especially the first paragraph, is really big. It's a
WP:QUOTEFARM
Commercial performance section is a bit all over the place. One tiny paragraph, followed by a huge one, then two more tiny paragraphs. It doesn't look very proportionate or clear. It needs refining. Three paragraphs of the same length would be best here.
I have made some changes, sorting the paragraphs in this order - 1) Minogue's two main audiences- Australia and the UK. 2) Europe 3) North America
Same for Development and release, the paragraphing looks unbalanced. I always try to make sure paragraphs in the same section are of the same length.
Synopsis and analysis, the quote at the end is already a block quote, so quotation marks aren't needed.
Reception section, it's so small there's really no point having a single line paragraph. Just make it all one para.
Ref 7: Official Charts Company, not Official Charts
There doesn't look like many points here, but some of them are quite big ones, as some section need some work done on them. On hold. —
₳aron 11
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.