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A fact from All of the Dead Girls appeared on Wikipedia's
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The result was: promoted by
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Created by Carbrera ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:36, 9 March 2021 (UTC).
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Hook eligibility:
inspired by a lyric penned by American actor Josh Richmanbut the article and source beats around the bush a bit more:
it came from the concept of the lyric “dead girls,” which was informed by ... Josh Richman ... It wasn’t a direct quote, but it was a comment about me. So I think "lyric penned by" Richman is not strictly true.
QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
[[Music journalism|Music critics]]
is an
overlink that can be removed. There are two "quotes from nowhere": The addition of keyboards provided "layering [of] majestic swaths of synths"
and which Havok repeatedly "begs".
I'd like these to be attributed to their source (e.g. "according to X", "X said that") in prose. —
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15:51, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: RunningTiger123 ( talk · contribs) 16:51, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
Sounds like an interesting song – I feel like I should check out this band. I'll be back with my review in a little while. RunningTiger123 ( talk) 16:51, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
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...performance would be recorded and used as...to
...performance would be recorded and was planned to be used as.... This carries a different implication more in line with what happened, but it doesn't introduce any information from outside the existing sources.
Overall, this is well-written and covers all key elements, and I really enjoyed reading it. Just a few small fixes and this should be good to go. RunningTiger123 ( talk) 03:37, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
Two more quick notes that I forgot to mention (my apologies for missing them earlier):
— RunningTiger123 ( talk) 03:48, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
Everything looks great! Passing shortly. RunningTiger123 ( talk) 18:44, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
This sentence: {{xt|Music critics provided mixed reviews of "All of the Dead Girls", who were indifferent towards the song's lyrics.}} doesn't seem to make grammatical sense, and I'm not sure how to edit it. It reads like the dead girls were indifferent toward the song's lyrics? Is that really what we mean here? —valereee ( talk) 20:31, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
All of the Dead Girls has been listed as one of the
Music good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: March 17, 2021. ( Reviewed version). |
This is the
talk page for discussing improvements to the
All of the Dead Girls article. This is not a forum for general discussion of the article's subject. |
Article policies
|
Find sources: Google ( books · news · scholar · free images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL |
This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||
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A fact from All of the Dead Girls appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 29 March 2021 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
|
The result was: promoted by
TJMSmith (
talk)
01:01, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
Created by Carbrera ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:36, 9 March 2021 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
---|
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
---|
|
Hook eligibility:
inspired by a lyric penned by American actor Josh Richmanbut the article and source beats around the bush a bit more:
it came from the concept of the lyric “dead girls,” which was informed by ... Josh Richman ... It wasn’t a direct quote, but it was a comment about me. So I think "lyric penned by" Richman is not strictly true.
QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
[[Music journalism|Music critics]]
is an
overlink that can be removed. There are two "quotes from nowhere": The addition of keyboards provided "layering [of] majestic swaths of synths"
and which Havok repeatedly "begs".
I'd like these to be attributed to their source (e.g. "according to X", "X said that") in prose. —
Bilorv (
talk)
15:51, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
GA toolbox |
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: RunningTiger123 ( talk · contribs) 16:51, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
Sounds like an interesting song – I feel like I should check out this band. I'll be back with my review in a little while. RunningTiger123 ( talk) 16:51, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
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Overall: |
· · · |
...performance would be recorded and used as...to
...performance would be recorded and was planned to be used as.... This carries a different implication more in line with what happened, but it doesn't introduce any information from outside the existing sources.
Overall, this is well-written and covers all key elements, and I really enjoyed reading it. Just a few small fixes and this should be good to go. RunningTiger123 ( talk) 03:37, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
Two more quick notes that I forgot to mention (my apologies for missing them earlier):
— RunningTiger123 ( talk) 03:48, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
Everything looks great! Passing shortly. RunningTiger123 ( talk) 18:44, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
This sentence: {{xt|Music critics provided mixed reviews of "All of the Dead Girls", who were indifferent towards the song's lyrics.}} doesn't seem to make grammatical sense, and I'm not sure how to edit it. It reads like the dead girls were indifferent toward the song's lyrics? Is that really what we mean here? —valereee ( talk) 20:31, 26 March 2021 (UTC)