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I noticed a few aspects of this article that could likely be improved, however before I edit anything, I want to make sure that I'm not changing anything that I shouldn't.
The article states that the synopsis (and therefore presumably the song list) are taken from the current licensed production. However, according to WP:WPMT/AS#NUMBERS, shouldn't the Broadway version be used instead? (There are some differences.) Also, the synopsis is nearly 1300 words long, but WP:WPMT/AS#NUMBERS states that two-act musicals' synopses should generally be between 800 and 1100 characters, with exceptions for more complicated plots. Is this plot sufficiently complicated to justify this length? I could believe so; all of the different characters' love interests form quite a tangled web, I just wanted to see if anyone with more experience editing plot summaries had any thoughts on this.
Is a character list necessary? According to WP:WPMT/AS#NUMBERS complex plot or characters are enough to warrant a list separate from the synopsis. This is a similar point to the above. Any thoughts? Also, according to WP:WPMT/AS#NUMBERS vocal ranges should be omitted unless there is a consensus to include them. Unless someone has a good reason to keep them, I will remove them in my next edit.
The "Love Plots" section seems redundant. The reader should be able to gain all of this information from the synopsis.
Rocky Role ( talk) 16:23, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
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I noticed a few aspects of this article that could likely be improved, however before I edit anything, I want to make sure that I'm not changing anything that I shouldn't.
The article states that the synopsis (and therefore presumably the song list) are taken from the current licensed production. However, according to WP:WPMT/AS#NUMBERS, shouldn't the Broadway version be used instead? (There are some differences.) Also, the synopsis is nearly 1300 words long, but WP:WPMT/AS#NUMBERS states that two-act musicals' synopses should generally be between 800 and 1100 characters, with exceptions for more complicated plots. Is this plot sufficiently complicated to justify this length? I could believe so; all of the different characters' love interests form quite a tangled web, I just wanted to see if anyone with more experience editing plot summaries had any thoughts on this.
Is a character list necessary? According to WP:WPMT/AS#NUMBERS complex plot or characters are enough to warrant a list separate from the synopsis. This is a similar point to the above. Any thoughts? Also, according to WP:WPMT/AS#NUMBERS vocal ranges should be omitted unless there is a consensus to include them. Unless someone has a good reason to keep them, I will remove them in my next edit.
The "Love Plots" section seems redundant. The reader should be able to gain all of this information from the synopsis.
Rocky Role ( talk) 16:23, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
{{
ping}}
me if I can be of any assistance. --
Xover (
talk)
06:40, 19 February 2018 (UTC)