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The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
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Moved to mainspace by Al Ameer son ( talk). Self-nominated at 18:52, 27 July 2020 (UTC).
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Article was moved to mainspace on July 22 and nominated within time. Length is adequate. Article appears neutral in tone. No plagiarism issues detected. QPQ requirement is complete. All images in the article are freely licensed on the commons. The nominated photo for ALT0 is clear at a low resolution and enhances the hook. ALT0 is interesting, just under 200 characters, verified by the cited source, but the citation is at the end of a very, very long run-on sentence. I suggest breaking up the sentence to put the citation closer to the hook. ALT1 is reasonably interesting, but I cannot find where it is cited in the article. I think I am looking for when Ahmed was killed? Did I miss it somewhere? Lastly, there are couple instances of direct quotes that need a citation directly after sentence which contains them. Overall the article is very well written and will pass with minor adjustments. Thanks.
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In the lead of the article it currently states: "His rebellion, launched to avenge the execution of his uncle Huseyn ibn Janbulad by Grand Vizier Sinan Pasha in 1605, gained currency among ..." I am somewhat confused by this statement, as Grand Vizier Sinan Pasha already died in 1596. Is there any explanation for this? Crispulop ( talk) 22:24, 29 August 2020 (UTC)
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![]() | A fact from Ali Janbulad appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 21 August 2020 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 22:19, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by Al Ameer son ( talk). Self-nominated at 18:52, 27 July 2020 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
Hook eligibility:
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
Article was moved to mainspace on July 22 and nominated within time. Length is adequate. Article appears neutral in tone. No plagiarism issues detected. QPQ requirement is complete. All images in the article are freely licensed on the commons. The nominated photo for ALT0 is clear at a low resolution and enhances the hook. ALT0 is interesting, just under 200 characters, verified by the cited source, but the citation is at the end of a very, very long run-on sentence. I suggest breaking up the sentence to put the citation closer to the hook. ALT1 is reasonably interesting, but I cannot find where it is cited in the article. I think I am looking for when Ahmed was killed? Did I miss it somewhere? Lastly, there are couple instances of direct quotes that need a citation directly after sentence which contains them. Overall the article is very well written and will pass with minor adjustments. Thanks.
Flibirigit (
talk) 02:06, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
In the lead of the article it currently states: "His rebellion, launched to avenge the execution of his uncle Huseyn ibn Janbulad by Grand Vizier Sinan Pasha in 1605, gained currency among ..." I am somewhat confused by this statement, as Grand Vizier Sinan Pasha already died in 1596. Is there any explanation for this? Crispulop ( talk) 22:24, 29 August 2020 (UTC)