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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk · contribs) 18:55, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
1. were ultimately completely exonerated. Suggest - were completely exonerated
2. Accompanying the squadron were the frigates Libre and the Spanish Sabina and the French lugger Vautour. Suggest - Accompanying the squadron were the frigates Libre, the Spanish Sabina and the French lugger Vautour.
3. blazing wrecks in the darkness. Suggest - blazing wrecks
4. The both exploded. Suggest - They both exploded
5. although Superb had lost just 15 men wounded. Suggest - whilst Superb had just 15 men wounded
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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk · contribs) 18:55, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
1. were ultimately completely exonerated. Suggest - were completely exonerated
2. Accompanying the squadron were the frigates Libre and the Spanish Sabina and the French lugger Vautour. Suggest - Accompanying the squadron were the frigates Libre, the Spanish Sabina and the French lugger Vautour.
3. blazing wrecks in the darkness. Suggest - blazing wrecks
4. The both exploded. Suggest - They both exploded
5. although Superb had lost just 15 men wounded. Suggest - whilst Superb had just 15 men wounded
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns.
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