Alexander Buchan (artist) has been listed as one of the
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The result was: promoted by
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talk) 09:37, 2 February 2022 (UTC)
5x expanded by Kusma ( talk). Self-nominated at 23:51, 20 January 2022 (UTC).
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: The article was expanded more than fivefold within seven days of the nomination. Length and sourcing are adequate. Prose is neutral in tone. No plagiarism issues detected, as the quotations and proper nouns are not violations. The image of Buchan has a complete fair use rationale. All other images are freely licensed on the Commons. QPQ requirement is complete. ALT0 is interesting, mentioned in the article and cited to an offline source, assuming good faith on its contents. ALT1 is interesting, mentioned in the article and verified to an online source. Flibirigit ( talk) 16:04, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Etriusus ( talk · contribs) 03:51, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
I'll get this review. I'll have comments within the next day or so.
Etriusus (
talk) 03:51, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Intro
He died after the second one,the "second one" what? I think you mean seizure but it can also be interpreted as he went on a second voyage.
Background
he was "young" when he was hiredthis contradicts the previous point. Reword it to say "he was described as 'young'..."
aware of this at the time.reword: "aware of this at the time he was hired"
evidence that he exhibited workWho exhibited work? Buchan? Banks?
Buchan family of North BerwickSpecify this is Scotland.
It could be a self portrait,Reword: It has been proposed to be as self portrat
Voyage with Captain Cook
could use these to show them to his friendsnotable?
To Banks' great relief, Buchan recovered.Puffery, in general, this sentence needs rewording to be encyclopedic.
Death at Tahiti
he also stated about Buchan's workWhat work? his paintings?
Artworks and legacy
Kusma Here are my initial thoughts. The article plays the pronoun game a bit too much and it can get confusing without clarification. Please let me know if there are any questions/concerns. Etriusus ( talk) 02:49, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
the people are more elegantly proportionedWho stated this? It reads like OR.
Alexander Buchan (artist) has been listed as one of the
Art and architecture good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: February 2, 2022. ( Reviewed version). |
A fact from Alexander Buchan (artist) appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 8 February 2022 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
|
This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk) 09:37, 2 February 2022 (UTC)
5x expanded by Kusma ( talk). Self-nominated at 23:51, 20 January 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: The article was expanded more than fivefold within seven days of the nomination. Length and sourcing are adequate. Prose is neutral in tone. No plagiarism issues detected, as the quotations and proper nouns are not violations. The image of Buchan has a complete fair use rationale. All other images are freely licensed on the Commons. QPQ requirement is complete. ALT0 is interesting, mentioned in the article and cited to an offline source, assuming good faith on its contents. ALT1 is interesting, mentioned in the article and verified to an online source. Flibirigit ( talk) 16:04, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
ALT0 to T:DYK/P5GA toolbox |
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Etriusus ( talk · contribs) 03:51, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
I'll get this review. I'll have comments within the next day or so.
Etriusus (
talk) 03:51, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Intro
He died after the second one,the "second one" what? I think you mean seizure but it can also be interpreted as he went on a second voyage.
Background
he was "young" when he was hiredthis contradicts the previous point. Reword it to say "he was described as 'young'..."
aware of this at the time.reword: "aware of this at the time he was hired"
evidence that he exhibited workWho exhibited work? Buchan? Banks?
Buchan family of North BerwickSpecify this is Scotland.
It could be a self portrait,Reword: It has been proposed to be as self portrat
Voyage with Captain Cook
could use these to show them to his friendsnotable?
To Banks' great relief, Buchan recovered.Puffery, in general, this sentence needs rewording to be encyclopedic.
Death at Tahiti
he also stated about Buchan's workWhat work? his paintings?
Artworks and legacy
Kusma Here are my initial thoughts. The article plays the pronoun game a bit too much and it can get confusing without clarification. Please let me know if there are any questions/concerns. Etriusus ( talk) 02:49, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
the people are more elegantly proportionedWho stated this? It reads like OR.