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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk · contribs) 14:56, 2 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Infobox

• Fine

Lead

• "It was written by Ionuț Armaș and Breyan Isaac, while Viky Red solely handed its production" → infobox says Red was also a writer.

"Songwriter" is an overall term which encompasses "lyricist" and "composer". Red was one of the composers, so her counts as a songwriter.

I get what you meant with this. How about a composer section in the infobox? Otherwise it might get confusing every now and then. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 17:54, 3 April 2020 (UTC) reply

• "Observers noted its minimalistic and Billie Eilish-inspired production." → observes such as crtics, right? Should't this be on the follow up setence?

Yes, I mean music critics, however, the sentence is about the composition still, and I wanted to put that before the reception (just as in the article itself)

• "Alcohol You" on native talk show → "Alcohol You" on the native talk show
• and radio station Virgin Radio → and radio station Virgin

Background and composition

• The lyrics of "Alcohol You" were written by Breyan Isaac and Ionuț Armaș. The latter composed the song alongside its sole producer Viky Red → So Ionuț Armaș was also a producer?

Red was the "sole" producer. "Sole" = "only". Only Red produced the song, but he and Armas were the composers.

I know the synonim. I was not getting it from the context, I mentioned a solution above. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 17:56, 3 April 2020 (UTC) reply

• finding inner peace; → Full stop
• Critics → Music critics, critics is too vague

Critical reception

• Fine

Music videos and promotion

• Shouldn't "Additionally, the team also created a video for an "alternative" version of the track (Crystal Freckles Session), which was released on 25 February" be mentioned on the background and compostion section? SInce it is a diferente vesion.

The alternative version is just the studio cut but with all background vocals remove. It should sound more 'live', although it technically isn't :) It's notthat different to be worth noting elsewhere.

Ok I get it, I had to ask. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 17:59, 3 April 2020 (UTC) reply

National selection

• and was appointed five songs → and five songs were was appointed
• conisting → do you mean consisting?
• noting "dark and mysterious" → noting a "dark and mysterious"

In Rotterdam

• Roxen was nonetheless internally selected for 2021 → Nonetheless, Roxen was internally selected for 2021

Release history

• Fine

References

• Apple Music is a publisher
• Either wikilink all the "European Broadcasting Union" or only one. Same aplies to Youtube and Wiwibloggs.
• Source 22 is broken, please replace it.
• Advise is to archive all this sources.
• I forgot to metion but either wikilink all the Apple Music or only one, since you decided to wikilink everything do the same here.

Overall

• You can now address these concers. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 22:37, 2 April 2020 (UTC) reply

@ MarioSoulTruthFan: I have responded to all the points that haven't been addressed. Thank you so much for the review, I will get into yours very soon in the next few days. Greets; Cartoon network freak ( talk) 17:39, 3 April 2020 (UTC) reply

@ Cartoon network freak: I left a note here on the lead, let me know what you think of such idea. Of course, when you get the time. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 18:01, 3 April 2020 (UTC) reply

@ MarioSoulTruthFan:  Done Cartoon network freak ( talk) 18:13, 3 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Just pointing ou something here, the review the nominator is refering to is a reassessment of one of my articles that is under scrutiny from the GA as a new reviewer decided to open up several and pass them withouth giving too much information or none at all to work on. You can read it all here. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 18:41, 3 April 2020 (UTC) reply