"Prior to the 2020 Contest," - contest doesn't need to start with a capital letter
"with Eugent Bushpepa finishing in eleventh place with "Mall" and Jonida Maliqi finishing in seventeenth place with "Ktheju tokës"." - try to change the second mention of the word "finishing" with a similar alternative word
"organised the 58th edition of Festivali i Këngës in order to select Albania's entrant" - the text in bold is not needed
"19 December and 20 December 2019 and the grand final on 22 December 2019." - the year does not need to be repeated twice in close succession if it is the same one
"It consisted of two semi-finals on 19 December and 20 December 2019 and the grand final on 22 December 2019." - this sentence is not mentioned by Eurovix. Please located a reliable source that explicitly mentions these dates
"however, submission process closed on 15 September 2019." - the submission process closed on September.
"The list of competing artists was released on 24 October 2019, and the songs were released on 9 December 2019." - same issue as the second query that I have raised in this section
"They qualifiers were selected by a jury" - The qualifying songs
"a jury consisting of two national members and three international members with connections to the" - try to avoid mentioning the word "members" in the same sentence
Delink Eurovision Song Contest since it is already linked earlier in the article
"Prior to the 2020 Contest," - contest doesn't need to start with a capital letter
"with Eugent Bushpepa finishing in eleventh place with "Mall" and Jonida Maliqi finishing in seventeenth place with "Ktheju tokës"." - try to change the second mention of the word "finishing" with a similar alternative word
"organised the 58th edition of Festivali i Këngës in order to select Albania's entrant" - the text in bold is not needed
"19 December and 20 December 2019 and the grand final on 22 December 2019." - the year does not need to be repeated twice in close succession if it is the same one
"It consisted of two semi-finals on 19 December and 20 December 2019 and the grand final on 22 December 2019." - this sentence is not mentioned by Eurovix. Please located a reliable source that explicitly mentions these dates
"however, submission process closed on 15 September 2019." - the submission process closed on September.
"The list of competing artists was released on 24 October 2019, and the songs were released on 9 December 2019." - same issue as the second query that I have raised in this section
"They qualifiers were selected by a jury" - The qualifying songs
"a jury consisting of two national members and three international members with connections to the" - try to avoid mentioning the word "members" in the same sentence
Delink Eurovision Song Contest since it is already linked earlier in the article